Reviews for Breaking Point
Opal chapter 2 . 5/6
PLEASE continue
ExAmoreDolorem chapter 2 . 8/18/2012
Tease! Why don't you update?
Qwestiria chapter 2 . 1/3/2012
this is great!

please write another chapter!
xxpinkgrlxx chapter 2 . 1/1/2010
plz continue this story it's really good
Pink Quills chapter 2 . 11/12/2009
please update
1707283 chapter 2 . 2/2/2009
I like how blatant they are being with eachother!
LadyNorth76 chapter 2 . 1/27/2009
Great fanfic! Update soon! Thanks.
fahzzyquill chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
really cute!
CatastrophicRiceBubbles chapter 2 . 1/26/2009
I'm definitely liking it so far.

As to suggestions for the spell: (these are in Italian because it's my second language)

Baciare contro volonta - To kiss against will

Inevitabile Passione - Inescapable Passion

Strangulato Bacio - Strangled kiss

Bacio di naturi - Kiss of another's heart

hope these help ]
Sunflower Kisses chapter 2 . 1/25/2009
Very good.

How about:

Basium suffoco (kiss to; suffocate)

Basio insolitus (to kiss; suffocate)

Basium opprimo (kiss; to overpower)

Dominus insolitus (to master; suffocate)

Hope I helped...you can always switch em around.
LadyBookworm80 chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Oh please write more.
The Eloquent Quill chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
I like this. Update son :]
TheHeartMaker chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
You now have 8 reviews! PLEASE UPDATE! I consider it my duty to nag you since I am bored and lonely. Good job on the first chapter, carry on!
MynameisInu chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
That is GREAT! i can't wait for the update!
SilverandSilent chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Update soon!
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