Reviews for A Better, Happier You
xoxokiss210 chapter 1 . 5/7/2010
i loved
Ghostwriter chapter 4 . 1/13/2009
I think it went very well. Catch ya on the flip side.
hpaich chapter 4 . 10/12/2008
Very well done! I could really get the sense of awkwardness and discomfort Brennan felt; you expressed it very well. And, of course, smoochies with Agent Booth - yum...

I just started doing Bones stories - actually just starting writing in August, so I always like to read other stories, to enjoy the different styles of writing and expressing thoughts and ideas.

Very good job.
Shameless69 chapter 4 . 7/27/2008
that was such an amazing fic...i feel that noone was ooc, and that it was packed with such real, raw was fab and very believable, congrats xoxo
McLover chapter 4 . 7/12/2008
Loved this story! Good job. I enjoyed the way you wrote Bones, Booth, Angela, and everyone. I think you kept them acting/doing things how they normally would.
Paradise Desdemona chapter 4 . 6/13/2008
I love it! Great job. I absolutely love the homour in it... end the ending is perfect.
KateCayce chapter 3 . 6/12/2008
Angela picked up the ulna from the examining table and hit Booth on the shoulder with it-a good, hard tap-and whispered, "No! Bad dog; very bad dog."

*snort* OMG! You are awesome! I love the Angela stuff at the end of this chapter - and love the whole story!
Angel-yura chapter 4 . 6/12/2008
OMG i loved it
TheLifeILive chapter 4 . 6/10/2008
I have a big goofy grin on my face. I don't think you petered out at all. I thought the whole thing was really sweet.

I love how she softens when she sees how defeated he looks. I loved how you threw Angela in there, great job writing her. The kisses *sigh* You don't need to end with a bang for it to be a satisfying comclusion.

Really great job!

*blushing* Thanks for the recommendation, you're too sweet:)

beaglelvr93 chapter 4 . 6/10/2008
EEP! That was a wonderful ending! You didn't peter out - I was perfect! Loved how he looked so forlorn, and how he just kissed her at the end!

:) Can't wait from more from you - You're a great writer!

Hawaianangelgirl chapter 4 . 6/10/2008
It was a good fic, really! I could picture everything in there! I loved the secretary, Booth definitely needs one that is Brennan's fan too, hehe! Would make things really easy!

Great job, I'll be looking forward for your next story!
Monisse chapter 4 . 6/10/2008
Ohh, so lovely! I really loved how you developed the story into their struggles, specially hers, how you made Angela came to rescue, and then this fluffy resolution!

I hope to read more from you soon.
megs720 chapter 4 . 6/10/2008
YAY that was great. PPS
a.touch.eclectic chapter 4 . 6/10/2008
This was great. I loved it. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future. Keep up the great work!
GorgeousGummyBear chapter 4 . 6/10/2008
YAY! hehehehe! i love it!
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