|Reviews for Bow or Break|
| Mari Wollsch chapter 6 . 4/14
| delia cerrano chapter 6 . 4/14
Quite different than the usual story. Enjoyed it a lot.
| cztelnik chapter 6 . 2/26
Enjoyed reading this story.
| daisycb chapter 6 . 1/31
| The Power Of Names chapter 6 . 12/22/2014
I liked this story. It was complex and easy to keep up with.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
Fucking you Sirius! I hate you, how you ...Oh my poor Sevvy! Sirius, you are a dog!DOG!
| ranchan-akari chapter 6 . 9/29/2014
Awwwwwwwwww! *gathers them all into a big hug*
| Black-Abbyss chapter 1 . 9/12/2014
Sirius kind of reminds me of Vernon Dursley
| Rain in the Dark chapter 1 . 9/4/2014
Not too fond of Sirius, but simplifying a character into a shell with no redeeming qualities is just so... wasteful. Why on earth would you want to do that? If you feel like you need a villain, a conflicted one is always so much more interesting. If anything, Sirius could hate Snape because of his own less than stellar behaviour towards him at school. After all, people do have a tendency to hate those they hurt the most. But that would mean that Sirius does realize what he did was wrong, and hates Snape because he serves as a reminder. His not quite mature mind would try and convince him that it was Severus who was at fault, and that alone could cause a conflict necessary for the 'Sirius is a villain' kind of story. Simply making him demented feels like such a copout.
Also, oddly enough, I can see a teenage Severus committing suicide, but not an older version of him. I know, I know, people have their breaking points and Snape had a life that could shatter a lesser man to pieces... but I don't think Snape intended to survive the war in the first place, and his main difference from a teenage Severus was that he had a purpose to fulfill before he went down. I can't see this ridiculously strong and brave character give up halfway, no matter what he went through. It's a part of what made him such an amazing character to begin with (and my favourite character in the book as well).
So really, it's just too oversimplified for my taste. I'm sorry.
| Magic chapter 6 . 8/21/2014
This was a great story :D
Glad almost everyone got a happy ending (:
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/25/2014
So Severus deserves an apology for the wrong Dumbledore did to him but Harry who went through the same (if not worse) by his own family doesn't?
| ilanit.harary chapter 6 . 5/6/2014
i'm glad they got help!
| Scioneeris chapter 6 . 3/13/2014
This was a beautiful story with a strong Severus. I really enjoyed it. This was just what I was looking for to read this evening! Great job. Loved the bit with Harry's Raven form and Sev's "help" and especially a Kingsley adopting Harry plot. That was neat! I don't think I've ever read that before! Fantastic job.
| lilyflower101 chapter 6 . 1/9/2014
I love this story. :)
| Obscene Cupcake chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
This was a good story, but I don't think I'll read anymore. A bit too nice at the moment. Lovely what you did here.