Reviews for Heartbreak
Guest chapter 1 . 2/25/2013
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looneybaloony chapter 2 . 10/17/2010
That was an amazing story, you really have a gift with writing; especially with your peoms. I'm not usually a big fan of poems, but yours is the exception. I loved them! Well done.
Jodie chapter 1 . 1/12/2010
deleted.nomore. gone.bye chapter 2 . 4/9/2009
Crazy Twilight Lover/Darkmoon of Thunderclan,

Aw! that was SO SWEET! I LOVED THE POEM! I'll email u soon!

Your bud,

alice chapter 2 . 3/24/2009
Finally... Nobody has ever written a story like that. Though I ended mine with bella having to be changed because he didn't get there soon enough. But I loved it.
Ileana DuBaer chapter 2 . 3/17/2009
This is how I secretly wanted New Moon to end. I thought the whole Volturi thing was a little... silly. It's interesting how how chose to write it in third person. Your style of writing made it work though and I thought it was very effective. Very, very well done!
Innocence and Instinct chapter 2 . 3/16/2009
sweet 3
Foxy-Fire6677 chapter 2 . 3/16/2009
awsome! more: the wolves ask him why he broke the treaty or they tryto wage war but bellatells them she jumped off a cliff and he did it to save her.
november21 chapter 2 . 3/16/2009
I loved how you arranged the cliff-diving. Nice idea.
Foxy-Fire6677 chapter 1 . 12/19/2008
awe.. so sad but yet so sweet.
backoffbellaedwardsmine chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
aw,i almost burst int tears

that was so sad
Mae017 chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
DontCountMeOut chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
you should write Haiku's their funnier this was good
My Little Mogar chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
that was amazingly deep. It reminds me of the stuff I write
ForgottenHeart chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
I think that you could definitely continue it...but it's still a good poem as is.
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