|Reviews for Happy Birthday!|
| yugiyamisex4eva chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
thanks to the dog doug is getting some
| NikzFlikz91 chapter 1 . 3/8/2009
Awwh swet! hehe Tom always makes me laugh ;) Great job!
| xXxThe Phantom's RosexXx chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
omg that was hilarious! i was laughing the whole time! great job!
| southpark33 chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
This was great. I like the Jeff Dunham reference with the dog that you can drop-kick over a fence.
| procol harum chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Ha ha that was awesome. I loved a lot of it, too, and being me, i'm posting, so sorry in advance for this longish review:
"We'll have fun on your account. If you so much as try to make a move on me, I'll shoot you. And I have a gun; you know it," Tom whined. - Okay, that was good. Not something I'd think Tom of saying, yet there, with him being grumpy and wanting to sleep, made it really believable )
"...So what's in it? Your penis? Seems most likely. But, Doug, your penis doesn't need to breathe. And if it does, that's actually kind of cool." - this made me spit milk all over myself. You've really got Tom on a roll in this story )
And I loved the bit where Tom wrapped himself around Doug so he wouldn't leave, and again, the hallway bit... ?I had a picture of Tom in my mind running after Doug in his underwear during it - and it still hasn't left lol.
And Tom being scared of tiny dogs is awesome, great idea )
Okay, I think that's it. Great story, hope you continue writing Tom/Doug stuff :D
| Asher Elric chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
That is amusing.
I have the same sort of dog, only long haird, named rocky.
| tewksgirl chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
This was so cute...I really liked it. As a fan of chihuahua's (i have 2 of my own), this story touched my heart! Great job!