Reviews for the dream leads to reality
PatronTequila94 chapter 1 . 10/14/2009
awesome stories - ur an excellent writter xoxo :)
bouncy 72 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Wow that was seriously hot. Great story
Sendmeonmyway chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
That was awesome. I'm glad you gave us a good view into what she was thinking about rather than just describing what they were doing. It made it much sweet that way)
bitten-sln chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
thats so sweet yet sexy! its wonderfully written i absolutely love it!.
rainfall91 chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
God that was beautiful! Such intense and incredible passion backed with their indescribable love. The emotions and...everything. Wow.
lovexisxamazing86 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
luv it. holy crap.
NeteleJala chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
Woot woot! great job, loved every minute of it!
focheesey-coolness-1 chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
so cute

he just couldn't resist

heheh ;)
SycoSiren chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
that was really emotional thats how every girls first time should be like
hot 101 chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Loved it!.
scabbedwings13 chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Aw, that was so sweet! I'm glad you took the time to actually describe what they were thinking instead of just what they were doing. Awesome story!
shanbug07 chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
Woo! Great story! Is this a one-shot, or an actual story? Either way, I love it!
xXbomboomloveXx chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
ohmygod! absolutly loved it