Reviews for The Long and Winding Road
Slashbaby chapter 2 . 3/17/2013
You have Dianne and Winston announcing there engagement in this chapter and in chapter one. Thought you may want to fix that :)
Alana chapter 7 . 10/10/2007
it was nice, very nice from the begining but when you started the crossover with ST Voyager it went down, as if you lacked the ideas.
Laseri chapter 2 . 7/15/2004
Well, interesting story, I liked the way you didn't waste time in getting our favourite couple started (unlike the show)! I do, however, have some grumbles. Your grammar, in parts, could use some work. Also you have a tendency to repeat things, eg you broke the news about Dianne and Winston's engagement twice to the same people. Also (sorry!) the dialogue in some places sounds like the descriptive part of the story and not like a young character talking.

You did do Neri's talk very well, and I especially liked the first part when she came back from the migration-that was beautifully written. The Ubri rescue was too easy, though, and I think you could have focused more on the younger ones almost getting caught to add some excitement, a la the original series. Other than that, good fic and hope to see more from you. Love,

Lase.
Jess chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
can u plz hurry up and and update it's drivin me crazy:

i pretty much only read ur shit

keep ritin
Jessica chapter 5 . 12/27/2002
I'm upset that Neri and Jason are in wheel chairs and you should make it that their relationship is more known you would think they're just friends but theres more than that they love each other and you should try and make that more obvous from jess
Jessica chapter 5 . 12/27/2002
I'm upset that Neri and Jason are in wheel chairs and you should make it that their relationship is more known you would think they're just friends but theres more than that they love each other and you should try and make that more obvous from jess
Jessica chapter 5 . 12/27/2002
I'm upset that Neri and Jason are in wheel chairs and you should make it that their relationship is more known you would think they're just friends but theres more than that they love each other and you should try and make that more obvous from jess
Sa Jupika chapter 6 . 8/8/2002
I enjoied this. It really entraining, and It's well written. Bravo to you!
Paix 8391 chapter 4 . 6/12/2002
Ocean Girl meets Star Trek : Voyager. -blinks twice out of surprise- I didn't exspect that at ALL, funny thing is I like this story. update asap OK?

-The wonderful Candy Andy-
hartfelt chapter 3 . 1/27/2002
I used to watch thios show and this fic is really good. I would love to read more of it. You made it seem so real, almost as if it had actually happened on the show. Great job.
reviewer chapter 1 . 12/31/2001
with exception to a few rather outlandish things (ie diane and winston marrying and jason going with neri on migration) it's pretty good so far. I can't honestly say there wasn't a time i had some similar ideas. ;)