Reviews for I Find A Map And Draw A Straight Line
spinningleaves chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
I love it! Such a great look at the Donnellys- I especially love the end with Tommy keeping track and everyone knowing the neighborhood will be his. Excellent!
annieluwho chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
really cute love how you describe tommy!
conundrum18 chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
I really really like your style of writing. You said so much in a short piece. Excellent story!
AerynPalmer chapter 1 . 11/1/2008
i really liked the simplicity of this! It was a good quick read :)
Charmina chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
I liked this. Short and simple but still making a point. The last bit with Tommy watching the fight and making sure there are no feuds even though he hasn't claimed the neighbourhood yet was spot on. Sounded just like Tommy. Great job!
darkdestiney2000 chapter 1 . 7/17/2008
Great job...I really liked it