Reviews for Pride and Pretenses
Dramione chapter 6 . 11/25/2017
COME ON HERMIONE YOU STUPID YOU SHOULD NEVER JUMP. this is a dramione fan fiction and not Cedric and Hermione I hope etier way it's still amazing so far.
Dramione chapter 4 . 11/25/2017
I swear I have not read this story before but I think something is off about Genevieve .
Dramione chapter 1 . 11/25/2017
I am so excited to be reading you story I am 100% sure I will love it will review what I think of it at and of the last chapter keep up the great work

Guest chapter 35 . 11/23/2017
Good merlin im hooked i dont want this to end
Guest chapter 20 . 11/19/2017
Good lord i cant stop reading this is awesome!
Guest chapter 18 . 11/19/2017
Why am i so hooked to the story line?
Hotmamantx chapter 1 . 11/17/2017
So I finished this in one day
Good job . Have you ever thought of writing a crossover Hermione /edward ( cedric ) . Lol you have a good storyline started .
oslca35 chapter 36 . 11/17/2017
Loved it
hgarett1995 chapter 8 . 11/16/2017
The last chapter defies even Magic Physics. I mean how? Granger let's say 40 kg falling of a 300 meter tower nearly splatters, I mean unless you don't know momentum Draco's hand would be ripped off instantly after even attempting to pull her or fall of and die with her. I think instead of the astronomy tower having her run to the lake near Hogwarts would be more poetic but that's just my opinion, like drown just like the first time she was saved by driggory in the trials.(I know it didn't happen but so does this story.) ;)
hgarett1995 chapter 6 . 11/16/2017
Nuuu! Why have her jump? I mean seriously where is the Hermione? This doesn't seem like Hermione? Suicide because she didn't have anyone to depend on I mean calm down my friend, I would instead include an accidental fall instead of a jump, have you thought about that?

Nothing like a good old slip, far better than the weak justification for suicide, and heck even Malfoy has better reason to do so, in fact one might say that he would be more likely be the one giving his personal statement.

But it's your story and just take my opinion and criticism as is, not to demean your writing but some of the back ground information is just too much I mean you should cut it and have it given to us at intervals instead of a force feeding everything. Also the paragraphs seem too full and should instead be slightly open to interpretation.
Ravenclawthemystic chapter 28 . 11/10/2017
Babydoll4414 chapter 36 . 11/7/2017
I don't know if to you still read your reviews but of you do I just wanted to say
You had me on an emotional rollercoaster from start to finish
With the anger towards wonderbitch and the sadness for Cedric then the happiness for her and draco then the sadness when I thought one of them was dead , the beauty of dracos sacrifice, how much he loved her
The laughter and the tears I had through this fic were very real and I'm so glad I read it
Miyakomono chapter 1 . 10/31/2017
I think you probably meant that Draco couldn't care less.
alluringveracity chapter 9 . 10/25/2017
hermione should stick a knife up genevieves vagina
alluringveracity chapter 5 . 10/25/2017
i hope genevieve chokes on all the ass shes sucking

im fucking crying i hope genevieve gets eaten by pennywise or some shit this bitch needa die
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