|Reviews for The Chase|
| mshorror chapter 3 . 6/6/2008
typical jobs at college is like in the office, or the library
as well as supermarkets too and restaurants, oh and
and i really like this story, i was getting tired of other stories always having edward as this innocent, virgin, gentleman. lol and jasper and alice being bf and gf. its nice reading a change finally /
| Nicole Kathrine chapter 3 . 6/6/2008
hahaha that was funny update ASAP!
| mad-sugar-but-sweet chapter 3 . 6/6/2008
lol hahaha 2 cute!
more soon plz
| Michelle62092 chapter 2 . 6/5/2008
cant wait to read more!:D
| Karren1109 chapter 2 . 6/5/2008
I like it a lot! please keep writing!
| Dark-Wiccan-Goddess chapter 2 . 6/4/2008
I say just go with what you know, then explain it to us, since not all of us are american, like myself for instance who is canadian.
| addi chapter 2 . 6/3/2008
i like your story, i think is funny. i just have one suggestion, please, PLEASE don't make bella so insecure, and make bella give edward a really hard time. edward needs to try harder. anyways, can't wait to read more.
| Carrie chapter 2 . 6/3/2008
Seems like a good idea. It's a great start, and think you should continue. Your doing a wonderful job! )
| MythicCreatures chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
I think it works if you do the English wording...espeically if it is Bella's POV. It makes sense.