|Reviews for Our Love|
| Nessarie chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
You should do this in Edward's PoV too. That would be awesome!
| edwardcullenissosexy chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
that was a wonderful first time. thank you. most people get it all wrong. this seemed more realistic. well, if I was bella, even if it was edward, i wouldnt have had sex with him after he broke my heart (yeah, i know. its not sex. edward doesnt have sex, he makes love bc hes edward! ) but other than that, it was a good representation of their first time, it was pretty good. possibly one of the best "fist times" ive ever read.
| Emipoo chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Aw. I really liked it. Sweet, but .. saucy? at the same time. Awesome.
| starrylove chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Hi :) I just wanted to say that this is my favorite ExB lemon, ever. It's so in character and sweet... I love it so much!
| Raenad chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
That's an awful lot of detail from someone who's never done it. I'm just sayin'. I like your one shots, though. Very romantic in a dirty sort of way. :)
| rothetwifan chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
How romantic. I still like the idea of Edward being old fashioned and waiting for them to be married.
| Clickish chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
My god, I didn't even know they were having sex! (OK let me explain before I seem insane.) It was just that you wrote it so beautifully that it wasn't just some sex story. It was like I don't know something entirley different. ok now I seem like a dork, haha ok well grat story... write more...
| nicole317 chapter 1 . 6/11/2008
luv it! sequel sequel!
| arebeltotheidea chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
This has to be my most favourite EdwardxBella lemon EVER... lemon EVER... your story EVER!
It's the best and i am totally in love! D Good work, and i like that fact that Bella tried to do it this time... and just... well every little detail. D
It was beautiful!
| NeteleJala chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
| Jayeliwood chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
very nice! You did a great job! You should of told me you wrote it! I would of totally read it sooner...
| Daring.Sorceress.of.the.Dark chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
that was very good. characterization was very precise.
| UsayImaDreamer chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I loved this : ) You really did capture the characters and their relationship. It was touching and awkward and sweet in all the right ways- as well as totally hot hehe. Why don't airplanes really have those convienent little rooms? AH! thanks!
| Amelia Desfalon chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
You might want to mention where they are. It's kind of confusing in the begining.
| DazzledbyEdward123 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I loved this oneshot it was awesome. I could totally feel the emotions that Bella and Edward were feeling.