Reviews for Invisible: Kim's Story
xxxErica Liowxxx chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Nice :)
ceraphine chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
awww ilove this one shot! you should do an entire story about this two!
anaddictedreader143 chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
OMG! LOve this story!
Lena xo chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
I love Kim/Jared stories, but so far this is the only Kim who's really quiet... most people make her quiet only around Jared, and the rest of the time she thinks... "differently" to other people. I like your story so far :)

Lena xo
Ms. Jessica Cullen chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
are you ever going to continue this story? please say yes.
Cheaward chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
That was the best Jared/Kim I've ever read
TheDay'sEye chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
Sweet. My heart goes to Kim.
Bloody Mononoke chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
aww omg i love this. its amazing.

it reminds me of the song "Invisible"

by Taylor Swift. good song:D


Alycat13 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
this is so nice and i can see that really happening. XD great job!
I Am Switzerland101 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
aw omg! so sweet i think jared's pov is a little better but this was still amazingly good! you just have to write a story abou them it would be amazing and one of the bests you have real potential!
persephonesfolly chapter 1 . 12/3/2008
Perfect addition to the Jared POV. Very sweet.
Voldemort Willeatyou chapter 1 . 11/21/2008
Wow. That's one of the best Jared/Kim stories I've ever read!

Ava Sinclair chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
This caught my eye when I was checking out your profile; I've never seen a Jared/Kim piece before. I loved it. You really brought a virtually unknown character to life for me and it's an excellent companion to Jared's POV. I love the emotion in it - I could feel how much this one moment meant to Kim, even when she didn't know how life changing it would really be. Her viewpoint is so relatable. I really hope to see more of these two, or any of the pack, really, in your writing. Have you considered doing a piece on Leah?
Namitsuki chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
Loved it. It was so cute, please continue.
Perfect love kills all fear chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
loved it. it goes great along with the jared P.O.V. Thid oneshot is also going on my favorites list.

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