Reviews for A New Chance Original
ShadowImageComics chapter 13 . 12/23/2016
You can add mine for I think that its stupid as well.
happycheese chapter 13 . 6/5/2012
hey do you think you could add me to the list ya see I havn't written any stories to post the message on :/ Thank you
Wolf prince arcturus chapter 1 . 4/22/2011
poor hinata ;)
Uzumaki Ricky chapter 1 . 5/24/2010
Bobboky chapter 11 . 11/27/2008
nice work, very nice other than a few word mix ups
tanithlipsky chapter 11 . 11/26/2008
Gravity The Wizard chapter 11 . 11/26/2008
I look forward to the rewrite.
vash3055 chapter 11 . 11/26/2008
spiritwolf35 chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
Sorry to say it but I dont think much of this story why is because I think it would be better if Naruto didnt come back to be a damn fox and has to find a partner it would have been better if he came back as a fox demon but in human form not as a damn fox sorry but that is just my opinion
kzinti7 chapter 6 . 11/22/2008
Please don't take this as a flame. But you seem to be rushing the story. You need to build a bite or people won't care for the characters. Plus you have alot of grammer errors. useings past tense when you should have used present. IE:Naruto saw this and thought about just letting them kill her, but know if that happen the mission would be called off. you need to replase the word "know" with the word "knew" for the sentance to make sense. You have many more like this in the ealier chapters.

take some time to plot out some character develoment and just paln slow down the story.

I like the idea you have but as i've said you seem too be rushing the story.
duckmasta2020 chapter 10 . 9/3/2008
I abosolutely loved this chapter...could've done with a bit more humiliation of jiraiya but oh well.
A Forgotten Fairy. .AKA- Fairy chapter 10 . 8/30/2008
YAY! jiraiya remembers!


twilightcloud18 chapter 10 . 8/25/2008
sharknight6939 chapter 10 . 8/25/2008
great chapter
PaulRap Raptor chapter 1 . 8/25/2008
I believe people already flamed you about the bad spelling already, so I won't say anything.

Keep up the good work.
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