Reviews for Devotion
caz1105 chapter 25 . 6/24/2012
What a brilliant notion having Jasper able to give Alice an orgasm without even touching her. Excellent story telling again xxx
caz1105 chapter 9 . 6/23/2012
Wow , that is the most detailed account of Bella's change. Totally blew me away. I bet SM would be impressed xxx
caz1105 chapter 5 . 6/23/2012
Still loving your fic. I've read about 100 fics now and yours will be one of my favourites . I'm a full time carer so I have a lot of free time. Can't believe you are so young as well, you are a very talented author , hope you carry on xxx
caz1105 chapter 2 . 6/23/2012
Hi, enjoying your fic greatly so far. Has made me smile lots, I enjoy Bella's silly antics. honestly humans are so dramatic! xxx
babesbraves chapter 26 . 5/31/2012
Absolutely fantastic book you made it come to life i cried like a baby at the time of Bellas change and thats no mean thing for someone nearly 50! I also roared with laughter as well. You have an awsome talent of making the book live it was like i was was in the middle of the room watching it all happen around me and that is a special talent of yours very few authors can do that, thankyou!
madnessdownunder2 chapter 26 . 1/12/2012
I don't know if you've finished this, if you haven't will you? This is very good! Well done!
graham5833 chapter 26 . 11/28/2011
Bril have u any more with voltri and tanya and jake and charlie
fresh-BLOOD-was-drawn-2night chapter 26 . 7/31/2010
i love it
robsten63 chapter 25 . 7/5/2010
Good story :) i like
mindy.18 chapter 1 . 6/12/2010
edwards-girl-4-ever chapter 23 . 5/27/2010
edwards-girl-4-ever chapter 22 . 5/27/2010
ch 21 and 22 were best yet
WhyIsBellaTheOne chapter 2 . 10/26/2009
oh please.. Bella was as fickle bitch and she was just mad that Edward was right about it. she is always dismissive of his feelings/concerns/fears/struggles, and then she punishes him for it.. god..Edward deserves so much better.
msashlyjudd8 chapter 26 . 10/15/2009
I think you did a great job, I really enjoyed reading this.
Midnitelilly chapter 26 . 10/11/2009
Great story, I really enjoyed reading it. Bella being a tracker is a great idea and since you made me think of it, it actually makes sense that she would have that ability.
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