|Reviews for The Raven in the Woods|
| MeMeDH42511 chapter 10 . 6/22/2008
this is really good. :) you should definatly keep this up. your a GREAT WRITER!
| gilmorefanforever chapter 10 . 6/22/2008
This is an amazing story. This chapter, especially. I'm very sorry to hear about your friend.
| corik80 chapter 10 . 6/21/2008
This is a wonderful chapter! I'm sorry about your friend.
| Amy chapter 10 . 6/21/2008
I like this story for one main reason: It remains true to the characters. Your writing style, or moreover, you, have been able to capture Brennan, Booth, Sweets, and the squints to near perfection! I can almost imagine them speaking or acting as you've written. Sometimes I feel that Brennan "understands" too much or converses personal issues with Booth that she usually would with Angela - but I'm pretty sure that's your way of making the B&B "connection" work out. The case is interesting as well. I'm looking forward to reading more.
| MadeOfStars chapter 10 . 6/21/2008
I am sorry for your loss. I wonder if you took you experience of loss and translated it into this story, because you did such a great job of helping BB process their loss. It is the best I have read since the awful finale, and I have read a lot. I also loved the line: "Maybe him trying to make her replace Zack with Stacy was like her trying to make him replace God with logic." I love the perspective Booth gave her. Keep up the great work.
| The Child of Time chapter 10 . 6/21/2008
Wow...I don't know what to say...Seriously, I'm speechless. That was an absolutely wonderful chapter. It was beautifully written. The way you used Booth to explain everything was amazing. Wonderfully worded, if that makes any sense. You took something that is hard to explain- and the way you worded it made it seem so simple. I'm really glad that you have other ideas for Bones fics! You know me, I'm your number one fan :) And now, my favorite quote of the chapter:
-“Because if you don’t sell me that dolphin, I’ll shoot you,” Booth said through gritted teeth. “Which means you would be responsible for a murder.”-
I loved that line! Something we know that Booth would say! The first thing that popped into my mind was "My, my, having a 'clown shooting' kind of day, are we?"
I am so sorry for your loss, I'm sure Jackie would have been so proud for you! She was lucky to have a friend like you.
| maggierose17 chapter 10 . 6/21/2008
This chapter is so poignant and well written, great job!
| Different Child chapter 10 . 6/21/2008
*hugs* Wonderful chapter and great fic so far.
I know what it's like to lose a friend. The beginning is hard, it doesn't exactly get easier but life goes on. Good for you, so strong, keep going for her. You seem like a great person. _ I'm sure your friend would be proud..
| Different Child chapter 9 . 6/21/2008
It fits them well but it was occasionally a bit confusing to see them all meshed together like this. But interesting. I do like dialogue though.
| MadeOfStars chapter 9 . 6/21/2008
Interesting choice, definitely a change-up on approach to the chapter. It was hard to follow initially but once I caught the flow it was pretty cool. I can believe that they think this way.
| Zentris chapter 9 . 6/21/2008
Stacy's thoughts threw me for like a line and a half but I thought this was a great chapter. Comparing pov's for both characters involved on the same subject was, I thought well executed. Great job! :D
| Kriti chapter 9 . 6/21/2008
aw..they were doing so well and now its like they've taken 10 steps back after 4 steps forward...
...personally...i don't like bones' assistant much either...she's just...irritating... them get better...and make the assistant realise that booth n bones are very close and have that special bond..she should stop butting in between,even if its unconscious...i know she probly does a lot of it for aproval from bones but she needs to pipe down the overzelous enthusiasm...
...yeah...update soon pl.!...this is going great!
| Chicklit chapter 9 . 6/21/2008
I just found this story today and have been reading through all the chapters at once. You've got a solid, interesting case, and Stacy provides a good foil for Brennan and Booth. It's very well done. In the interest of provding concrit, this chapter was very jarring having just read the previous eight (nine?). As a reader I found it very difficult to go from third person POV to first - I think it would have flowed better had you stuck with the format used in previous chapters. JMHO!
| The Child of Time chapter 9 . 6/20/2008
Ok, how addicted am I to this story? Very! I actually squealed out loud when I saw the message in my inbox. I am not joking- I sounded like Angela! And the I read it and I was crying by the end because it was so sad to read about Zack and everything... Very well written, as always! Oh, and somehow I don't mind if you make it 12 or 13 chapters either :)
| corik80 chapter 9 . 6/20/2008
I like how you presented this chapter. For me, the thoughts were in character. Keep up the great job!