Reviews for Focus
Guest chapter 7 . 7/6
All of your chapters have been awesome so far, but this one was BEAUTEOUS, it was so sweet and every time you described Tony, I could see and feel whatever he was feeling, this was so good!
anberry chapter 7 . 7/24/2016
You are right for this chapter. Fuck. Tony Stark should not be allowed around children. It makes ovaries implode. Hearts implode. It's too much fluff. I can't take it. This thing had me flailing in sweetness and madness and cuteness for the whole length of it and my god. There are no words. Well done.
The Lupine Sojourner chapter 4 . 12/5/2014
Ohmiword! Ohmiword! These are the cutest things I have ever seen!
nancyozz chapter 9 . 10/2/2014
This was hilarious..I'm so bummed you didn't continue it
nancyozz chapter 8 . 10/2/2014
Liked it...just wish they had gone skinny dipping lol...or Tony had caught her skinny dipping lol
nancyozz chapter 7 . 10/2/2014
I LOVE that mistletoe kiss...and God how I want Tony and Pepper to have a kid...I'm sure they'd be as adorable with one of their own as they were with these kids
nancyozz chapter 6 . 10/2/2014
Fluffy but wonderful!
nancyozz chapter 5 . 10/2/2014
Boo lol...I love Tony and pepper angst, but not when they break up or turn to others...I hope next chapter is happier for my otp
nancyozz chapter 4 . 7/23/2014
How is this woman resisting him...is she a freaking robot? Lol
nancyozz chapter 3 . 7/23/2014
I feel horrible at laughing at poor Tony ...oh well, I'm over it...can't believe he blurted out his feelings that way...I'm sure Pepper won't believe him
nancyozz chapter 2 . 7/23/2014
First of all...love Tony flirting with himself...and love love love Tony at the press conference...how the hell is Pepper restraining herself from jumping this man ?
nancyozz chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
How Pepper didn't jump him and smother him in kisses after this I will never know lol
Guest chapter 9 . 10/19/2013
Really enjoyed this and love your style of writing! I hope there is more xxx
Arihimew chapter 9 . 8/29/2013
I like that it's Pepper who move first! and I thought it's only Take one, where's the other takes? hopefully you'll update ;)

This is a bunch of fabulously written one-shots, by the way. you're a terrific writer!
Arihimew chapter 7 . 8/29/2013
Oh God. this one is too adorable and cute for words. I'm dying of fluffiness
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