|Reviews for Focus|
| Guest chapter 7 . 7/6
All of your chapters have been awesome so far, but this one was BEAUTEOUS, it was so sweet and every time you described Tony, I could see and feel whatever he was feeling, this was so good!
| anberry chapter 7 . 7/24/2016
You are right for this chapter. Fuck. Tony Stark should not be allowed around children. It makes ovaries implode. Hearts implode. It's too much fluff. I can't take it. This thing had me flailing in sweetness and madness and cuteness for the whole length of it and my god. There are no words. Well done.
| The Lupine Sojourner chapter 4 . 12/5/2014
Ohmiword! Ohmiword! These are the cutest things I have ever seen!
| nancyozz chapter 9 . 10/2/2014
This was hilarious..I'm so bummed you didn't continue it
| nancyozz chapter 8 . 10/2/2014
Liked it...just wish they had gone skinny dipping lol...or Tony had caught her skinny dipping lol
| nancyozz chapter 7 . 10/2/2014
I LOVE that mistletoe kiss...and God how I want Tony and Pepper to have a kid...I'm sure they'd be as adorable with one of their own as they were with these kids
| nancyozz chapter 6 . 10/2/2014
Fluffy but wonderful!
| nancyozz chapter 5 . 10/2/2014
Boo lol...I love Tony and pepper angst, but not when they break up or turn to others...I hope next chapter is happier for my otp
| nancyozz chapter 4 . 7/23/2014
How is this woman resisting him...is she a freaking robot? Lol
| nancyozz chapter 3 . 7/23/2014
I feel horrible at laughing at poor Tony ...oh well, I'm over it...can't believe he blurted out his feelings that way...I'm sure Pepper won't believe him
| nancyozz chapter 2 . 7/23/2014
First of all...love Tony flirting with himself...and love love love Tony at the press conference...how the hell is Pepper restraining herself from jumping this man ?
| nancyozz chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
How Pepper didn't jump him and smother him in kisses after this I will never know lol
| Guest chapter 9 . 10/19/2013
Really enjoyed this and love your style of writing! I hope there is more xxx
| Arihimew chapter 9 . 8/29/2013
I like that it's Pepper who move first! and I thought it's only Take one, where's the other takes? hopefully you'll update ;)
This is a bunch of fabulously written one-shots, by the way. you're a terrific writer!
| Arihimew chapter 7 . 8/29/2013
Oh God. this one is too adorable and cute for words. I'm dying of fluffiness