Reviews for Conception
good story but the. is no lemon in this story chapter 1 . 8/8/2014
one day naruto what to have sex with hinata but hinata was tired of sex. so naruto ask hinata to have sex because he was living for a mission. hinata give naruto her pravet part and she told naruto to fuck her like he never did befor. naruto put his pens inside hinata's legs. hinata was ejoying
tamary chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
whats the sons name
ili777 chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
good one and cute ending
Floput chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Nice xD
DASvicks63 chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
That was damn good
Guest chapter 1 . 6/29/2012
Not bad, you might want to try more of these in in the future. Just add more length, or mabye a small back ground story and a littel more character dialog and you got a good story. Over all a pretty good story
TheAstroSecret chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Awsome story, but one question. I thought Hinata had clear lavendar eyes and stuff, not orb-blue... o_o Greats story overall!
Ghkfvb chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Awesome make a continuation!
Swimgirl28 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
that was REALLY GREAT! I like the was how you explained it, you're really good! :D
The Unknown Twinkie chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
This is sweet like cotton candyo.
kiuibi123 chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
aw... kiwaii!
King0fn0obz chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
LOL this was crazy. 4/5.
nekopriestessofthewind chapter 1 . 4/13/2009
LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!I feel very .

neko-chan out.D.X3
stephenkinglover chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
Loved it!
Evil Little Cosplay Girl chapter 1 . 1/5/2009
you said nine months later that the son of Uzumaki Naruto and Hyuuga Hinata was born, but if they were married wouldn't she be Uzumaki Hinata?
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