Reviews for Prodigal Delinquent
nxkris chapter 4 . 10/24/2008
great story i love the idea your using on this one. update soon
Rainbow2007 chapter 4 . 10/24/2008
i love it
windlg chapter 4 . 10/24/2008
update soon

its cute and a little scary
LdyGossamer chapter 4 . 10/24/2008
I really enjoy reading this story and I'm glad to see this update!
Dysgrammatophobia chapter 3 . 10/22/2008
Wow, what a great take on the prodigal Harry story. I love how you're doing it. His personality is very well done. Thanks for sharing.
Leticia Moriarty chapter 3 . 10/16/2008
wicked story i hope u write more soon i really wanna know more and WHAT HOUSE IS HE IN? pout u didnt say pout
Eskaybe4 chapter 3 . 10/14/2008
Nice story!
Alorkin chapter 3 . 10/14/2008
A cute tale. A completely clueless but more-than brilliant Harry with a penchant for breaking rules. This wold make a great long story, especially as how Harry and the twins get along so well.

I notice you never told us what House Harry is in. Shame that.

I noticed a few minor errors though the only one that sticks in my head was when Harry paid three Galleons and five Sickles, and got thirteen sickles in return. If he paid three and five, then the total should have been two Galleons and ten Sickles. My math could be off, though. I also think you've undervalued his purchases by quite a bit, unless you're going on the market value of gold and not a set exchange.

Other than that, loved the snarky sarcastic and rule breaking Harry you've come up with. I'd love to see more of him.

To that end,I have placed this on my alerts list and hope to read more at your convenience.

Alorkin
psychoticKisshu chapter 3 . 10/10/2008
Lord have mercy on the WW 'cuz Harry sure won't. I can't wait to see how Snape reacts to Harry.
Hericus C chapter 3 . 10/2/2008
Interesting start. I love a smart Harry however, this one seems to lack common sense in the ways of the world; perhaps a bit too naive for someone who devoured books and learned to manipulated the Dursleys' a little. It was also mean not to give the house...I assume from black bed curtains its Hufflepuff but what in the world would make him a puff?
zoisyte chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
this is great
luna andie chapter 3 . 9/5/2008
Just discovered this story.

I really like how you are setting it up.

Harry's curiosity and immaturity while at the same time still being terribly clever and not understanding why everyone can't do the same stuff as him has been written very well.

I think you've hit the right balance in making it realistic without going too far, like some smart harry story's do.

I look forward to more.
Aria Dragoncrest chapter 3 . 8/30/2008
Excellent Story so far.
imgonnadie chapter 3 . 8/28/2008
Excellent story so far. Please do continue to write.
CheckitDude chapter 3 . 8/27/2008
Interesting...

You have my attention

But the story still needs to start moving

You are still in the "Explaining Part" of this story

I like this story

But still...

Anyways update soon I'll be waiting eagerly for the next installment :D
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