Reviews for Prodigal Delinquent |
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![]() ![]() ![]() great story i love the idea your using on this one. update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() update soon its cute and a little scary |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoy reading this story and I'm glad to see this update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, what a great take on the prodigal Harry story. I love how you're doing it. His personality is very well done. Thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wicked story i hope u write more soon i really wanna know more and WHAT HOUSE IS HE IN? pout u didnt say pout |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A cute tale. A completely clueless but more-than brilliant Harry with a penchant for breaking rules. This wold make a great long story, especially as how Harry and the twins get along so well. I notice you never told us what House Harry is in. Shame that. I noticed a few minor errors though the only one that sticks in my head was when Harry paid three Galleons and five Sickles, and got thirteen sickles in return. If he paid three and five, then the total should have been two Galleons and ten Sickles. My math could be off, though. I also think you've undervalued his purchases by quite a bit, unless you're going on the market value of gold and not a set exchange. Other than that, loved the snarky sarcastic and rule breaking Harry you've come up with. I'd love to see more of him. To that end,I have placed this on my alerts list and hope to read more at your convenience. Alorkin |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lord have mercy on the WW 'cuz Harry sure won't. I can't wait to see how Snape reacts to Harry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start. I love a smart Harry however, this one seems to lack common sense in the ways of the world; perhaps a bit too naive for someone who devoured books and learned to manipulated the Dursleys' a little. It was also mean not to give the house...I assume from black bed curtains its Hufflepuff but what in the world would make him a puff? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just discovered this story. I really like how you are setting it up. Harry's curiosity and immaturity while at the same time still being terribly clever and not understanding why everyone can't do the same stuff as him has been written very well. I think you've hit the right balance in making it realistic without going too far, like some smart harry story's do. I look forward to more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent Story so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story so far. Please do continue to write. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting... You have my attention But the story still needs to start moving You are still in the "Explaining Part" of this story I like this story But still... Anyways update soon I'll be waiting eagerly for the next installment :D |