|Reviews for Princess,Ninja,Hero|
| The gaming deity chapter 6 . 7/13/2012
i finally heard it ahem: YOU'RE TO SLOW
| Marrrs chapter 10 . 4/6/2012
My critisism on this review is on the GRAMMER I like the story, but the grammer is a bit smudgey, but! All in all this was an amazing story nonetheless it had a great storyline and I hope you continue writing like this!
Ewww I used words I don't know ._.
I think this is my worst review...
Enough with my blabbering!
| KiraReySolo chapter 10 . 2/3/2012
Your writing is very choppy. Good plot, but your writing needs help.
| RayHollowsArchive chapter 4 . 7/15/2011
I like how you use Sheik's speeches from OoT to blend in with what she's saying XD it's cool
| 53007 chapter 10 . 10/31/2010
I've just read this whole story all in one day. So, it was very insteresting and nicely done.
| KingdomKeyDarkside chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Wow! This sounds interesting. I'll be sure to keep tabs on your fics.
| mysteriousmystery chapter 10 . 7/2/2010
LOVED IT! best story i have ever read! it was excatly what i waz looking for!
| TamaskanLEM chapter 7 . 1/16/2010
I like this story so far. There's not a lot of female sheik fanfics I could find. The affections between Sheik and Link is cute.
Anyway I stopped at 7 for the moment to say I know what you did there. I like that JLU episode too. Been awhile since I've seen the Batman Beyond crew.
| im-dead-n-gone chapter 10 . 12/27/2009
Okay, so I totally disappeared from Fanfiction and now I'm back, giving this story a review it deserves. Really good job on the story, a few mistakes here and there, but past that, I love it.
| Ilia chapter 10 . 12/17/2009
That was great!
| Cimar of Turalis chapter 10 . 11/28/2009
Second time reading this story and it is even better the second time through. You do a good job at describing the battle scenes and make them flow, which is sometimes a hard thing to accomplish given how much time is put into writing a good fight scene. A solid 9.5/10 in my book. Just add a little bit more description here and there outside of the battle scene to make it a perfect 10.
| restless-tempest chapter 10 . 6/27/2009
So, I read this whole story. To be honest... I didn't like it. I don't really want to seem like an a-hole, so I'm going to use constructive criticism. One of the things that I noticed other people pointed out, was the grammar. It was shabby in quite a few places, and I started to notice it more and more as the story progressed. I try not to let these things bother me in a story, but I did notice it many times. I suggest getting somebody to proof read your writing before posting it. That way it can be the best that it can be. _ The story line itself was... my main worry. I'm going to be completely honest and say it was extremely predictable. Less then halfway through the story I could tell Zelda and Sheik were going to stay separated, and that Link was going to choose Sheik. And as soon as you wrote that Link and Sheik made love... I could tell they were going to eventually get married and have a baby by the last chapter. I don't really want to delve further into the subject, as it is only fanfiction and I shouldn't really expect my mind to be blown out of the water by a completely amazing and original story. I'm sorry if I came off as rude, I really didn't try to. Thanks for reading.
~Have a good day.
| hawktakesflight chapter 10 . 6/6/2009
You have a great story idea and an interesting storyline!
You could try to fix up your tenses and words more, but overall it's still an interesting read.
| SheikahLover chapter 10 . 5/23/2009
This was a very good story. I enjoyed reading every minute of it. It truly was good, and keep up the good work in writing stories.
| Linkphan123 chapter 10 . 5/14/2009
I loved it! I also like how you took the ending from TP. Keep up the good work with your new stories!