Reviews for Collateral Damage
WinchesterPhantom chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
Hey!

LMFAO! This is hilarious! The dialogue and flow was perfect - I love your writing. I've never really cared much for Donnelly but I think you may have changed me...lol!

"I'd be very careful about what you say to me. We're stuck together until someone decides we're worth rescuing and until that blessed moment arrives, you're going to be my bitch. Understand?"

That really had me in stitches.

Also good job on Jackie boy!

~ Winy!
Arabesque01 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
I loved this...very fun, and love the "young lady". Very true to character, and you have Liz's dialogue down perfect. Thanks for sharing.
Teyerin chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Thoroughly enjoyable read and very believable/humorous banter. Thanks for sharing!
mccoylover chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Jack nailed long before I did. "Young lady"...that would do it lol.

You know I'd like to see you utake this to the next level.

Another chapter...please?
InstantGratification chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Haha, i really enjoyed reading this. I LOVE Liz Donnelly. Great job!