|Reviews for Wizard's Defiance|
| TeenTypist chapter 1 . 11/2/2012
Poor Carl...I am seriously loving your Young Wizard pieces. I just read "A Family Meal" and didn't realize I'd read it before until I tried to review it and couldn't. Excellent work.
| Destinies Creator chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
LOVE this as well! You're such a talented writer! Especially where Carl is concerned... Once again, congratulations on a spectacular fanfic!
| Emily chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
Poor Carl. But she made it, so that's good. : )
I liked it, and I knew Carl must have felt bad after that meeting on the beach, but now I know how bad. I repeat: Poor Carl.
| zebrasdancing chapter 1 . 7/5/2009
| Silverclaw teller of tails chapter 1 . 5/14/2009
So sad but so sweet. That was beatiful. It must be so hard for them when a kid dies on erranty. One of the best TomCarl one-shots I've read.
| Star Holder Commander chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
I suggest that you do a follow up chapter. What happens when Nita is safe and Carl realizes that someone else gave their life for her.
Great story/chapter. 10/10
| PhantomPenguin chapter 1 . 11/2/2008
I think I'm being sucked into your Young Wizards fics :p I love how you write Tom and Carl! You do such a great job with their personalities D Great job!
| tryanforever91 chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
Hey, this was a really good fic!
First off, you have a very nice writing style. You've a good control over the language, and you do a good job of vividly expressing what's happening inthe story. Carl's feelings in particular are conveyed in a very powerful way.
The characterization in this story is also really good. With Peach, you really hit the nail on the head, and as for Tom and Carl, there's a really nice dynamic going between them.
The story ties in seamlessly with Deep Wizardry, and I really love all the subtle connections you made.
So, great job overall. I really liked this story!
| ThReE AqUiLa chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
its nice to know your thoughts on this particular scene in deep wizardry. kind of sad but nita would die if she took the oath its part of being a loyal wizard.
| Reading Redhead chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
That is just FANTASTIC. I've always felt that the scene between Carl and Nita on the beach in DW is one of the most moving in the entire book - if not in the entire series. I never quite thought about Carl's reaction to the information, though. I think you did a great job at working that through; your writing is great, and everyone seems really in character. I have to say, the quotes, Biblical and otherwise, were also really great (and I loved Peach's line about it just being "a matter of semantics").
Please write more in the fandom! I know I'm looking forward to it.
| imakeladrygirl chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Great job! I loved hearing Carl's thoughts on this moment in the series when it looked like it really was all over. The writing is awesome. Bravo!