Reviews for Cheetos
iamdeMILO chapter 1 . 4/29/2013
Awwww how cute !
Hanelli chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
I loved this. I can't stop smiling, really, seeing- well, actually, reading, Jared like this is so... Cute is the best word to describe it.
I was wondering if you could let me translate this to my language. It will be so much fun!
This was incredible, really. I loved it.
Too cute for me :3
LeftHandedPeopleRule chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Aw! So sweet! I love Melanie/Jared fluff. Love how Mel counters Jared's remarks too.

'Only when you try to separate me from my Cheetos.'

Love it

Phoenix Gryffis chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
good but extremeley nshort
LyraMusica chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
OMG! I FEEL SO WARM AND FUZZY INSIDE RIGHT NOW! So much fluff in this! Definitely one of those moments between them that come every now and then. GREAT JOB!
dail-of-the-air chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
A great snapshot into normal life between Jared and Mel! Though I must say, Cheetos bags don't have blue on them .. do they? It's one of those things we don't pay much attention to.
Agustina Griego chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
I really love it.
TheInkredibleHanny chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Awh this was cute(:
Gone Gone Very Gone chapter 1 . 7/14/2009
I love this. Mel and Jared are so cool!
Kimblekn chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
I LOVE Melanie and Jared together! This was cute!
Yami Uchiha chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
Haha That was excellent XD
ThunderSpeak chapter 1 . 1/25/2009
haha that was so cute
boundtotomorrow chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
aw. so cute! (faves).

twinerdette, xoxo.
Anna-Belikov-Fuller chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
I read this roughly 8 minutes ago, and I'm still giggling.


Aurag2 chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
grea idea for this, its so cute.
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