Reviews for A Broken Hallelujah
YourxMuse chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
God, that was a great story. Just, wow. (:

Cried at the end. And when he said he liked Brooke. :( But it was a wonderful story.
lalez chapter 1 . 2/8/2009
wow dark but great

love it
raphi1860 chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
omg i loved this story! the ending broke my heat though and i agree with the other reviewers, i'd love it if you'd make it a dream and continue your story!
x-Leyton4Life-x chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
I loved it but I wish you didn't kill Peyton :(

I wish it could have been a dream and this could be more than a one shot.

It definitely has the potential to become more but either way it was written very well!
lukenpeyton-puckleberry-4ever chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
wow, that was deep. i thought maybe it wasn't going to be an one shot that maybe the end was just a nightmare he had that night and it made him realize he needed to tell her how he felt. loved it
TrueLoveAlways16 chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
so good!
xoMelanie chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Omg! That was so heartbreaking. :( You did a great job writing it.
LeytonIsAlways chapter 1 . 6/4/2008
Beautiful...only i wish you hadnt killed peyton...the story has really good potential..i loved ur writing...please erase peytons death...lol..please!