I love that Ebisu isn’t a prick in this, your writing and outtake is outstanding

“We love Lee” we all say in unison

That was probably the most entertaining fight scene I’ve read in my life, I’m straight dumping for the girls

The squawk of indignation from Naru could easily play an hour long compilation, I love it !

Ohhhh bitch was that a riveting chapter. I didn’t even think of Naru, Hinata and Sasuke as team seven but wow if that doesn’t work well with your writing !

Gotta know that even Tobirama cant make 4 clones let alone 5 like why make Sasuke be able to use it if his chakra level is the same as Tobirama it doesnt make sense and also it s Naruto signature move so letting Sasuke use it is disrespect

Wtf? Why do I have this creepy feeling like this senpai of Sakura is none other than Kabuto?!

This is so weird. Did I miss any author's note or something? Yeah, feels like it, this seems more & more like hinata's time travel fic along with sasunaru. Cuz, what the hell?! She's so frickin lit! Who are you? And what have you done to hinata?

Okay, I love this. Zabuza & Haku will be joining the Konoha ranks; I like that Hinata is not shy & conservative. But I hate her all the more now. Sasuke's character has always been treated like this which I don't like at all. He might be more emotionally intuned but people always take advantage of him be it for his safety, for someone else's safety, or be it for their own gain. And Hinata surpassed all of them. She observed & read about him & his clan, all of it being very calculated steps.
Be it acquiring every available intel on him for hyuuga clan politics, cuz we know about uchiha & hyuuga long-standing feud; then it's possible she approached naruko as a teammate, (as she ain't our naive/innocent hinata), and racked out this plan to keep the uchiha & jinchurriki in the same team which makes it easier for her to keep an eye on them both, even if she doesn't know about the jinchurriki thing, she still could've planned this team for her to keep an eye on uchiha as naruko is most definitely 'the dead last,' so she approached her or was approached by her that three years ago, she played it nice befriending naruko but, slowly as she found out more about naruko, she figured her to be a good person & their friendship really evolved; so her being defensive for naruko makes sense; then she could be a potential spy for hyuuga clan.
Now, I know sasuke can be a dick but he isn't really one, it's just ingrained in his uchiha blood. But I hate how he's always exploited with or especially without his knowledge. It's everybody in konoha only cares for his clan, be it the foolish & greedy council members, some high-rank shinobis & shinobi clans just waiting for him to develop & get proficient to use his dojutsu - which is again selfish, missing nins gunning for his eye, he doesn't know yet but still, he's just a pawn in itachi's whole ploy, like his whole life being a genjutsu controlled by people around him, by just swaying & directing him; all bcuz he's a single-minded, goal-driven, emotionally intuned person.
Like literally, I feel so bad for him, it's like a 'curse for being an uchiha.' He was never free to walk his steps, Itachi impaired his mind by trapping him in tsukiyomi for 72 hrs showing not only the screams, blood & death of his clan but always the same words of 'to kill me, hate me, to become strong, kill the one closest to u.' Just hearing this for 72 hrs straight his brain was rewired. He may not be going crazy with anger & hatred but he can't let go of the pain of betrayal either.
So again seeing this, just hurts. Precautions are good but.. I don't have to like it.
Either way, the other half of the chp was lovely.

OMG That was so damn epic! Hinata & Naruko's co-ordination attacks were soo good!

Omg! This chp just! They're so freaking cute! In the first scene where sasuke was standing on top of the tree with his red glowing sharingan eyes staring down at naruto & using katon just enough to illuminate his face! That was straight-out romantic! My heart stopped! And now this! The hair & kiss! My heart is thudding!

OMG! That was soo damn good! Especially with trapping kakashi in the hole that he dug.

OMG...so happy to see you

OMG! Like a dream come true!

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