Reviews for The Beast
NaruHinaRyu chapter 5 . 4/6/2015
Ooops, got caught off! It just doesn't make sense her aggressive reaction. She might be hurt but they were mentally attacked while sleeping. If she's hurt because he sleeps around, well she knew that from before and he might change. She didn't even give him a chance. Like she gave the brother. Is it becase f his friends? I hope she reconsiders. If she gives the other guy who everybody says is bad the benefit of the doubt. Why not Naruto? Doesn't track.
Otherwise interesting and I hope you continue this story.
NaruHinaRyu chapter 6 . 4/5/2015
Interesting story and hope you continue it. Except for that last part/sentence it was all interesting. All their powers and in our world setting. Want to know ther background story. Is this a superhero/magic school? I agree that both Hinata and Naruto should be angry with Ino and Shikamaru for what they did. That was an invasion of privacy and should not be forgiven easily or at all. I mean why is Hinata acting like that? He's memory was erased. That's an attack, like somebody giving you a date rape drug. Why is it his fault. She slept with hm. She knew of his reputation before. So WTF?
CharNinja LOL chapter 6 . 7/5/2013
No Hinata
RoyalPrincessHinataHyuga chapter 6 . 7/4/2013
AMAZING THATS WHAT I THINK OF THE STORY! D I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH. d and no I am not over exaggerating either. D you are doing amazingly amazing with the story and I have no questions or concerns. but I do wish you could update more.
but Its ok I understand if you are busy and all of that type of stuff. D so its ok if you can't update a lot. D

I honestly think I am one of the biggest fans of this story. lol D I always check if there is an update for this story and if there is I drop everything else that I was doing just to read the story. i love it that much. D
CptnCorr219 chapter 1 . 7/4/2013
Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit. Shit escalated quickly. Quick suggestion, get a beta.
Rose Tiger chapter 6 . 7/3/2013
No Hinata!
nbcaihbsd chapter 6 . 7/3/2013
duh... what the hell did Hina act like that? i dont get it.. in the end he didnt have memories.. its not like he did want attack her..

and the like "If I was that easy to forget about then I never mattered in the first place" duh is she stupid or what.. she erased it.. he couldn't remember something he didn't have.. really.. that was a bit too much

i just dont want her to end now in the arms of Shiyo.. that would be stupid and very low of her..

but really good story.. keep going ;)
GuestC chapter 5 . 6/28/2013
It is getting better, keep with the good work! :)
Update soon I can't wait for more.
llazo4108824 chapter 4 . 6/27/2013
I think it needs more chapters and i like the fanfic.
freedomsmile chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
please make more chapters!
i really want to read more of it, so keep up the good work... :D
-freedomsmile
Topaz Princess chapter 4 . 12/28/2011
I really do like this story alot, even with all the little errors it like to see you update this story as i am eager to figure out what will happen next
CharNinja LOL chapter 4 . 10/15/2011
Yea party
Hinanaru for eva chapter 4 . 10/13/2011
OMG I love it
RoyalPrincessHinataHyuga chapter 4 . 10/12/2011
awwwww please continue please i really like this story i want to see what happens when you get the chancce to please.
Asuka Kawashima chapter 3 . 1/26/2011
Sweet chapter!
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