|Reviews for In His Shoes|
| Nikolai22 chapter 19 . 9/8/2015
Just finished it.
Well done, though the ending two chapters could have had more done with them or could have went differently.
I especially congratulate that you kept it clear as to who was who. I read a similar story to this about Katara and Azula but t was impossible to tell who was who because people kept being referenced to using words like
"She" in this story it was obvious and known that Zuko ment Zuko in Sokka's body and that Sokka was Sokka in Zuko's body.
| Nikolai22 chapter 1 . 9/7/2015
Lol (after reading chapter 1) I always thought that would be the funniest thing ever if two people were fighting and killed eachother and then both go as spirits at the same time like
"you killed me!"
"What? You killed ME!"
"You started it!"
"Your the one who got mad when I beat you!"
"Well you were a douchebag about it!"
(The setting for that conversation would be after a sword dual by two nobles...it was to the fiirst blood but then one got mad and it became to the death and they both impaled each other)
"I had a family you prick!"
"Well I had a beard growing in!"
"Well...now what...wait...I just realized we're dead."
"Well...great we're both dead. Happy now?"
"I said do you wanna truce?"
"After you FUCKING KILLED ME?!"
"Why not we both killed each other what's the point of being enemies for eternity...this is weird."
"Oh that's great! Not like if you refused I woulda tried to kille you again or anything. *attempts to slap the other guy on the back but hand goes right through* Not that I woulda been able too anyway."
"You're still a douchebag."
"Yea well you killed me."
"And I can same the same about you."
"Ok...well at least I never pissed myself in a fight before."
"How did you?! STOP LOOKING AT MY DEAD BODY DAMNIT!"
| InsanityIsClarity chapter 19 . 7/12/2015
This was spectacular... Definitely a favorite of mine!
| Flavio S chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
This, and your other avatar stories are really great. This friendship between Sokka and Zuko is really interesting. Although I found it weird that Sokka and Mai ended up together.
| Guest chapter 19 . 1/24/2015
I love how this story allowed Sokka and Zuko to create such a strong bond with each other, without breaking their characters much. The way the story was presented in great detail from many different perspectives was great :D (it couldn't have been easy).
The way this plot weaves itself seamlessly into canon was ingenius
| mightylini chapter 19 . 1/17/2015
umm the pairings, i cant say for sure that i am satisfied... i thought that the chemistry between sokka and jin was better than with mai even though shes really awesome and that toph should have ended up with zuko
also thought that toph should have been able to figure out that sokka wasnt really sokka but zuko because she could detect lies and shes actually pretty bright when she wants to be (shes just too lazy but thats what makes her more awesome)
| mightylini chapter 17 . 1/17/2015
okay thank god aang said no because for a second i almost believed that theyd both die :'( and the joined hands is super cute maybe this is a zukoxsokka as an actual pairing
i also really liked the effect image of having them suddenly start bleeding, its really cool
| mightylini chapter 16 . 1/17/2015
just wondering... if yue is a girl moon and doesnt wear any clothes and sokka always stares at the moon, doesnt that kind of count as cheating to suki when he keeps on looking at the naked yue..?
bleh brainfart just ignore me
| mightylini chapter 8 . 1/16/2015
im slightly disappointed zuko didnt get traumatized and have permanent mental instabilities... but i understand your fanfiction didnt want to become too dark and depressing
| mightylini chapter 7 . 1/16/2015
aww i like the part where zuko wants to keep a bit of aangs innocence, seems like he finally started caring for them and also noticed he didnt really even mention anything related to 'capturing the avatar' so he finally started growing up
i also totally like that you added jin in, the poorl girl needs to be in more fanfics! and even though i previously totally shipped zuko with jin, i think that she should totally end up with sokka! hes such a sweetheart with her (at least when hes not thinking about yue or suki) and toph and zuko should end up together because theyre both so perfect 3 but preferably when theyre in their own bodies
| mightylini chapter 2 . 1/15/2015
just wondering is this story going to be romance between sokka and zuko? id totally love it even more
| BlatantBookworm chapter 2 . 1/14/2015
This is quite an interesting an idea. Most pressingly, the idea that Zuko's colourblind and now Sokka is too. I love that.
| Kellsabelle chapter 19 . 1/9/2015
This was a fantastic story! Thankyou so much for writing and sticking with it untill the end to finish it!
| Moxy chapter 19 . 7/27/2014
I enjoyed this story so much. I love the way you handle Zuko in particular, but you also do a wonderful job keeping everyone realistic and in character, it's always a joy. And Chapter 8 made me think of Another Brother, I wondered if that was where it came from. Thank you for this wonderful story. I know what it's like for RL to take your energy and time away from writing, but I cannot express how wonderful it is to find the many beautiful fics you've written over time. I hope my shorter chapter reviews aren't annoying-I'd just rather send a quick note with my immediate reaction than try to save it all for the end, because I know I'll forget. Also, I hope my emotional responses amused you. :D
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/27/2014
AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH perfect awesome THANK YOU *runs to Epilogue*