|Reviews for In His Shoes|
| Yersi Fanel chapter 2 . 6/12/2008
I think your story is very interesting! I hope Zuko remember what Agni said, I mean, if not he is gojng to be in deep tourble, mostly the spirit ones, then again, maybe he would remember ones he is with Aang or something.
I was so right when you write about him waking up and find out his Uncle was not exactly there for him, pretty hard hit for him, after all, he only has his uncle, it was perfectly writted.
See you arround them, bye!
| OveractiveImagination39 chapter 2 . 6/12/2008
I heard abut this story from a recommendation from another author and I really am glad to have found it. I like the premise, but more so I like the way that you have written the characters. Toph was great and her conversation with 'Zuko' very well could have been one that she would have with Sokka - which does go to show just how similiar they can be. I think it will be interesting to see how the guys change as they are forced to live each other's life.
Good story - I can't wait for more!
| JL chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
Zuko's COLOURBLIND? Ha, nice twist! Or maybe all firebenders are colourblind? Maybe all earthbenders can 'see' like Toph... maybe they just don't think about it. Cool idea. :)
Iroh is definitely going to figure it out, right quick.
I wonder if Toph can sense stuff about Zuko-in-Sokka's-body- a different gait or differnet physical mannerisms or something? Now that I think about it, there's probably lots of little personal ticks people have that we take for granted and don't notice but close friends would.
Constructive crit: just some editting slips and a couple of spelling mistakes but nothing truly horrendous or confusing.
I'm so on board for th next chapter! :)
| Joshrandom chapter 2 . 6/9/2008
This is a really great story, and your really writing it well.
Not that I want to write your fic for you, but I was wondering about the whole bending thing. I seem to remember that bending was an aspect of the spirit, not the body. So while it would be fun to see Sokka discovering firebending, I think it would be even funnier if Zuko found out he could now waterbend, and the reactions of the gang when 'Sokka' starts bending should also be good.
I'll shut-up now, update soon!
| Hyperactive Lioness chapter 2 . 6/9/2008
Wow. Just wow. This was really good... interesting... weird IN A GOOD WAY!
LOVE it, can't wait for the next chapter!
| KeyLee chapter 2 . 6/9/2008
| Narultra too lazy to log in chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
I have to say i love the premise of this story. Sakka and Zuko friendship stories are the best. The co-opera tion we saw between them in /the boiling rock/ was full of win. I love how you use Yue, there aren't too many good fics with her on them. Is Yue going to play an bigger role in the story than just a spirit becouse Yue is one of my favorite characters and sokka/yue is best pairing sokka can have.! Suki WTF? Update soon.!
| Smitti chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
Loving it so far! I can't wait to see where you go with this. I look forward to the next chapter! :)
| StarReader86 chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
Glad I jogged your memory of that movie. Anyways, another great chapter with so many interesting parts. Like Iroh thinking that something happened to Zuko and Sokka in the spirit world, that's Iroh, he's so wise :D ! And Zuko actually showing concern for Toph who he barely even knows, that was so cute!
The part where Zuko realizes that in Sokka's body that he can't firebend made me think: How the heck is Sokka going to firebend? But I'm sure when he does, it will be hilarious and done in 'Sokka style.'
Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Herpestidae chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
| Katkid chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
I actually squealed when I saw that there was a new chapter-I was that glad you decided to continue! Your attention to detail is impressive. I especially liked the eyesight differences. I also really like how you change the tone as it switches between Sokka and Zuko. The Sokka sections have a more sarcastic feel to them and Zuko's are appropriately more serious. Good work!
| Kitkat113227 chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
| 3VAD127 chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
Whoo! Awesome! (dances) I don't know if I said this earlier, but I especially enjoyed the fight scene in Chapter 1. Cool realism... not to mention the two of them beating the crap out of each other. Even if it was supposed to be pretty serious. LOLz anyway.
Um, well, I think this chapter was especially interesting because of the Toph interaction with Zuko. Zuko is so dark and depressing and so un-Sokka-ish it only made sense that Toph could see at least somewhat through his facade. At the least, I believe she knows something's up. Same thing with Iroh - he knows his nephew, and he knows something weird is going on. O.o I think they know...
Anyway, it will be VERY interesting to see how Sokka and Zuko cope with their new "situations." Awkward to the max. :D G, I'm such a fan of this story now. I can't thank you ENOUGH for writing it! And (gasp) actually updating! Yes, thank you so much. Can't wait for the next chapter.
| Wren Sharpbeak chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
This is FANTASTIC! I absolutely loved the interaction between Zuko and Sokka in the Spirit World; it was beautifully in character for both of them and utterly hilarious.
My only nitpick was the fact that Zuko had his swords with him while working at the teashop. Somehow that just didn't seem plausible considering that when Jet attacked, he borrowed the blades of a nearby city guard. But, i can overlook that due to the originality of the overall idea.
I've read a number of 'switched body' fan-fics, but this has to be my favorite already. You've kept everyone completely intact, and i can't wait to see where you take this.
I'll be looking forward to the next update!
| RueBroadway chapter 2 . 6/8/2008
Oh wow, this is really good, y'know, besides that fact that it's got my favorite characters :o)
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Zuko is such a dork in Sokka's skin!