Reviews for Beginnings
Cassandra's Cross chapter 23 . 7/6/2008
Oh, poor Charlie! How humiliating. The twins would have given him a very bad time about that, I'm sure. I'm assuming the Muggle lady Charlie Apparated on top of thought he'd been riding a skateboard. Who is Mike, by the way? Is he somebody you made up?
Cassandra's Cross chapter 22 . 7/6/2008
This reminds me of one of those BBC specials where they have 21st century people live like Victorians or something and film their struggles from start to finish. It all seems so terribly primitive compared to our button-pushing, flip-switching, instant-messaging lifestyle, but like Charity, you come away with a new respect for those poor Victorians!
HPFanFictionFan chapter 24 . 7/6/2008
Sorry I haven't been reviewing lately. I've got so little spare time ... :(

Still a very interesting series, this one!
MBP chapter 24 . 7/6/2008
WOW is this sinister. It's amazing what you can do with just a few lines, Katy. Now I have chills...

How many more chapters to go?
McFlyFan101 chapter 24 . 7/6/2008
great chapter
Gaby Black chapter 24 . 7/6/2008
Great update! I liked the last line.

- Gaby
Miss Bliss03 chapter 24 . 7/6/2008
What a nasty nasty little squirt! Goodjob as usaull.
Anomalous Anonymous chapter 24 . 7/6/2008
This was well written-I like the crocodile comparison, the mental image is really clear there. And I like the way you incorporated Tom's bullying spirit. Good job. Not that that's a, you know, surprise, or anything.
Kore-of-Myth chapter 24 . 7/6/2008
Oh you only have one left! Nearly done - you must be proud of yourself!

I liked this chapter - Tom Jr. really was the last person I'd consider you to write...

Keep Writing!
Winterlude chapter 24 . 7/6/2008
It's really incredible how these little snippets can be so poignant... Great.
silverbirch chapter 24 . 7/6/2008
To get that feeling of menace in just 100 words takes some skill. Probably the best one yet.
alix33 chapter 23 . 7/6/2008
"“Mike, what’s a skateboard?”" - There isn't a Weasley (of the seven born ones, their dad, or their mom, who is one by marriage) in the whole HP world who can actually handle Mike's answer, except maybe Bill, I feel.
Anomalous Anonymous chapter 23 . 7/6/2008
I really liked this-it was clever and expanded on an event that was lesser known-it's nice to see that explored. Wonderful job, as usual.
Kore-of-Myth chapter 23 . 7/6/2008
Snort. Poor Charlie...

Keep Writing!
Kore-of-Myth chapter 22 . 7/6/2008
I don't think anyone else has done Charity...I do like this one as well. Brava!

Keep Writing!
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