|Reviews for The Tribulation of Ron Stoppable|
| Ash yuki chapter 1 . 7/31/2017
haha i love this story
| EmberQuill chapter 1 . 5/17/2014
Oh man, it's been a while since I laughed this hard at a story. I loved Ron's overreactions after waking up from the nightmare. Perfect timing with him coming back and freaking out about Kim's smile.
| Quinntana2 chapter 1 . 4/16/2013
I love this series. Poor Ron but sadistic Kim is amazing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
| mykes chapter 1 . 5/12/2012
Haha I love this series. So funny :)
| Redline57 chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
This was awesome, nice job!
| Pantherian Queen chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
This awesome in the humor department. Please write more kigo stories and funny Ron stories.
| Well of Silence chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
the "love?" trilogy.. hehe absolutely Hysterical :) Moves to the top of my Kigo List
| Wolf-of-Five-Elements chapter 1 . 11/28/2009
Hahaha... very nice. Poor Ron... P
| PigSlay chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Hahha. XD Poor Ron. He needs to get a boyfriend during "Wedding Week" so he can have his own fights and annoy KiGo. ;)
1. Kim had turned his best friend into - Kim's a g irl. ;)
2. “Thats great,” - There needs to be an apostrophe ( ' ) in between the t and the s.
3. and a the name of one of the most expensive restaurants in Middletown on it. - And the or and a?
4. he wanted to ask a question that he didn't want to ask. - I guess this isn't a critique so much as a question. Do you mean he was going to ask a question he didn't want to, or do you mean exactly what you wrote?
5. I think "creped" is a misspelling. "Crept"?
6. gave Ron hope the the day wouldn't end in a massacre. - Hope that the day.
7. When the finally saw Johnny - When they finally saw Johnny.
8. the area where is testicles - Where his.
9. he sat their frozen as - Classic mistake. In this condition it would be "there", not "their".
10. ticked of individuals - off.
11. “I know your not - in this case it would be "you're" not "your".
I'm not trying to be rude with these critiques, I'm just trying to help you be a better writer. :)
P.S. Can't wait for Wedding Week! :D
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
lol i HATE curious george so i see y kimmie would b mad :)
u r so awesome :)! keep it up!
| BioDragon chapter 1 . 2/2/2009
And thus Ron gets a horrible trauma in his life... again. This guy does not have good luck does he?
| Alcandre chapter 1 . 12/13/2008
Wonderful! That's all that I need to say.
| Alphawolf69 chapter 1 . 9/19/2008
*still trying to stop laughing*
This was priceless.
| yui1808 chapter 1 . 8/21/2008
wow... you gave me quiet a laugh here... poor ronald... but seriously you could just cut his head off than giving him a scare of his entire existence... thanks for posting... hoping for more kigo's to come...