|Reviews for Twilight|
| Azurerin chapter 9 . 1/30/2011
This is a very sweet chapter, but it's rather short, too. Well, just write the story in your own pace, it's better than hurrying up and forgotten something in the middle. Best of luck for the next chapter.
| KoumiLoccness chapter 9 . 12/14/2010
Coo chap kuz nice yo Peace Koumi Gonez Happy-Holidays...
| collateraldamage-x chapter 9 . 12/11/2010
I have to be honest here, I totally thought you had given up on this fic. I'm glad to see you haven't. As much as I don't like Twilight, I'm liking the direction you're going with this. It's much different than the book.
By the way, congrats on becoming an aunt. :)
Hope to see another update from you soon.
| Morganaftw chapter 9 . 12/11/2010
i love it so sweet xx
| Morganaftw chapter 8 . 8/8/2010
wow i love it i havent read twilight but seen all 3 films so far and love them lol this is good and cant waite to read more xx
| Azurerin chapter 8 . 6/26/2010
Hmm, this chapter is rather short than the others... Well, can't blame you or anything, since I ever done the same thing...
In my opinion, this story is getting better with some change of POVs and some original storyline from you, please keep up the good work...
And, I really think that Hikari's family name is Yagami... Or maybe I'm the one who's mistaken..? ah, well, nevermind... It's not really important anyway... Looking forward to your next update!
| Azurerin chapter 3 . 6/26/2010
Hmm, I'm rather surprised to find out that Yamato's role is of Carlisle... Oh, yeah, I think Hikari and Taichi's family name is "Yagami"... I guess that's all for this chapter, I'll hop on to the next!
| Azurerin chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Hmm, personally I think that your vocabulary, grammar and description is nice, but I kind off feel that this is almost the same as Twilight's story... I hope that there'll be some different scenes that the ones in Twilight in the next chapters... Good luck
| Kiari the Animal Lover2014 chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
you should continue this story cause its really good
| Kiari the Animal Lover2014 chapter 8 . 4/8/2010
this is really good when will you get the next chapter up cause im really looking forward to it
| OutsidersWhiteTiger chapter 8 . 3/20/2010
I noticed the comment in a prior chapter, tat you had made. I believe you had stated that you were having trouble with detailing the scenery. I have been taught how to make a discription of any environment make the listener/reader feel as if the are staring what is being described. Well, that's what my friends say. I do have trouble with fight scenes, however. I would be willing give advice and/or examples on scenes that you wish to have described in your stories.
| Uchiha-Kirara chapter 8 . 3/11/2010
I never thought Takeru would apologize to Hikari :3
That's so cute!
Aww, I can't wait for them to get together x33
| windedlove chapter 8 . 3/10/2010
I'm not a huge fan of Twilight (it's not awful, but it's not high on my favorite list), but I do like this story. I'm glad you decided to steer away from the novel. It makes it less predictable. I myself am planning stories based on novels so I'm glad to see another author unafraid to do the same thing. Keep writing!
| firewhiz chapter 8 . 3/10/2010
I wanna read more of this and it's really good! So please update soon :)
| KoumiLoccness chapter 8 . 3/10/2010
Dang short chap but its coo! Koumi/Sorato Out Kuz..Peace...