Reviews for Storm in a D cup
Angervo chapter 40 . 12/18/2014
Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! This is definitely one of the best fanfics that I have ever read. So many brilliant details, characters and plot twists. And Gene and Alex being so ... themselves, arguing endlessly, misunderstanding each others feelings and generally making a mess of everything. I loved the idea of Alex returning to 2008 to say goodbye to Molly - giving Alex finally peace of mind and chance to love Gene without feeling guilty. And that ring-shaped mark in her finger - it was just beautiful. And Genes tattoo. And Cruickshank (where in earth did you find such a name?) being in love with Alex and Gene being jealous. And Jaspan and Cruickshank being from the future, too. Actually, I loved everything in this story! Hope that you will write a new one someday.
80s-diva chapter 40 . 6/8/2014
Loved it absolutely perfect just enough plot balanced nicely with some galex xx
Ashes voyeur chapter 40 . 3/20/2013
Absolutely freaking amazing.
That was the first, and last, A2A fic I'll ever read.
I don't think there could actually be a better one.
Thankyou for a great read, and congratulations!
ashes voyeur chapter 32 . 3/19/2013
Hey. This whole story has been absolutely amazing, but this chapter really tops it. The team of you have done an amazing effort, this is better writing than the actual show.
I hope someone shows it to someone in a position to do something with your efforts!
Right up there with the best fanfiction I've ever read, actually maybe with the best fiction. Cheers. I've spent way too much time reading this...GREAT WORK!
Serena89 chapter 40 . 8/2/2012
Wow. Reading it took me three days, but it was worth it. This was a long, epic and brilliant piece of writing. The whole case was awesomely staged and planned. Kudos! And I was also surprised to see that you wrote it having seen only series 1 - and yet you picked up on the fact that only coppers end up in this world, that there might be others but they forgot because they've been here too long...and the look of understanding in Brian's eyes when he looks at Gene could be interpreted according to canon. Bloody brilliant. Thank you for writing!
haveunotthought chapter 40 . 7/9/2012
Fab story. Very believable characters and well tackled issues. I have read this straight through pausing for a few hours sleep at about 3.00 am.
Quattro Queen recommended and she wasn't wrong.
It's hard to believe you wrote that after first series as it held up to scrutiny of the next two series without falling out of character. You really got the story right.
rebelxxwaltz chapter 40 . 11/20/2011
Oh goodness! I just read this entire fic over the past three days or so, and I absolutely *loved* it. It was relentlessly entertaining, carefully thought out, and basically just all-around fabulous!

I'm new to the Ashes fandom, so I'm currently making my way through a lot of fanworks. I have to say, this story contains the best characterizations I've come across so far. Perfect IC dialogue of which I'm so jealous- because I know if I ever tried to write Ashes fic I could never *ever* come close to doing it as well. ;)

The thing that really impressed me the most about this story was the tremendous detail throughout. You seem to have a real flair for description- geography, scene-building, and original characters that really came to life for me.

Not to mention, the way you built the relationship between Alex and Gene? Me gusta. It was sweet torture at times, the way you let them get so close and then knocked them back beyond square one... attract and repel. It made the conclusion just that much more satisfying in the end.

And that's it! I could ramble on even more- with the delicious length of this story, extra praise would be warranted- but I think you get the point. Totally adored it. End of story!
chloeg24 chapter 40 . 5/6/2011
I read this story over the space of 2 days and fell completely in love with it. I love the way that you write and I am looking forward to reading some of your other things! Chapter 37 made me cry, I don't know whether it was because I am frankly sad, but it was AMAZING! Sequel maybe?

Best wishes,

Chloe xxx
80's Babe chapter 40 . 4/16/2011
Wow I've just spent the past 2 days in my sick bed absolutely hooked reading this story from start to finish it's fantastic you got the characters spot on and loved the way it all tied up at the end and Galex got their happy ending. Was sad about what happened to Brian C and would love you to do a spin off to see if he found Molly and Jaspen back in the present day...

Very well written you are a very talented writer and I look forward to reading much more of your work.

ignatz chapter 40 . 11/9/2010
I've read this story so many times and I never fail to find something else in it I hadn't noticed before. Truly one of my favorites - as a fanfic and as a story in its own right. Thank you so much for sharing your writing gift.
MissLP chapter 40 . 9/11/2010
Wow, I simply don't know what to say. This story was just simply amazing. Tension, laughter, tears...the works. This is, honestly, one of the best things I've read in a long time. You're such a fantastic writer, I'm still a bit speechless really. The plot was brilliant, the characters and the characterisation were spot on and it was just absolutely outstanding. Thank you so, so much for this, you're truly inspirational.
Ilovebiscuits chapter 40 . 9/8/2010
Wow. *clicks all four boxes in the review page*
MrsCakeLady chapter 40 . 8/2/2010
I've loved all your Ashes stories, Lucida. They're really well written and I especially like how you keep the background details the same in each one - ie Gene's ex wife and Carol at the station etc. They're romantic and passionate, without being cloying. I hope you keep writing more for Ashes, I'll be looking forward to reading more. I also enjoyed Ticking Away and Glorious as well. The lovely Mack deserved some happiness!
SarahBlackwood chapter 39 . 8/2/2010
I don't know what took me so long to read and review. I'm evil. Finally! We thought the day would never come! I love Alex's wedding outfit. And the lovely description of her hair. Poor Brian. Pooor Brian. But at least he got his kiss.

Thanks for the Sam mention. It's good and fitting that Gene would think of his friend on the day. "would probably have blubbed, the scrawny unshaven Mary."

I like that the actual marriage part was kept brief and to the point.

'Evidence,' she whispered to him, a wicked smile on her lips. Nice!

The wedding speech was very well done. I like that it was in character for your Gene and not too surgary. And it sums up the whole fic nicely. "I started looking forward to each day because that might be the day I could fire her." hehhee.

This was great, the Stones fan in me loved this bit: "as he strutted and pouted in an Jagger-inspired dance"

I've never been quite convinced by Alex calling Gene "honey" It just doesn't sound quite right to me.

mool freet! love this.

The Molly part was well pulled off. I like that she isn't reeally lying to him. Thanks! lovely chapter.

'Wedded. Bedded. Job done.' nice line.
Littleminilion chapter 40 . 7/6/2010
wow. there's not much more I can say. the best fan-fic i have EVER read :]
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