Reviews for Empire's Heir
Hunchbook chapter 6 . 9/25/2008
Interesting, I'm not sure how well this Kaddar matches with the one in the book, (and I'm not sure how much I actually like him as a character), but I'm drawn in as though by an electro-magnet...
hanakazari chapter 4 . 7/4/2008
I love this story in general, because it is so different in style from any of the TP fic I have read. It is heavier and grander and I suppose that makes it more suited to Carthak and Kaddar. I also like the Kaddar that you portray, not as kind or gentle as other writers tend to show him, but as a product of his upbringing, regardless of what modern readers think is acceptable. And yet he is not without morals.

And being a law student, I loved the mock trial.
Tortall101 chapter 3 . 6/21/2008
interesting chapter - i look forward to the next one :D
Tortall101 chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
Excellently written - the flow was very good.

I enjoyed this chapter and am looking forward to the next installment :)
Warrior of Ice chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
I like this piece a lot, particularly this chapter. You've made Ozorne quite crafty, and his decision to give Kaddar Barca's son as a slave is horrifyingly fitting. Please continue!
hanakazari chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
This is quite beautiful; the style is somewhat careful and delicate and reminds me of something I've read before, although I can't remember what. Something Shakespearean, perhaps.
Tortall101 chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
quite deep - i thought the emporer was going to be Kaddar until i read it :)