Reviews for When It Rains
Narnian Pirate chapter 1 . 1/29/2012
Awww, this is just great! Edmund is awesome this fanfic shows it!
CarsonandMrs.Hughes4ever chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
A great story. Very good.
TeaBoysGirlfriend chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
Wow, that was good. It seemed long when you read it- I don't know how to explain it but I definitley loved it
Bundibird chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
Wow, that was good! it was really sad, but at the same time it was really happy. i cant decide if it was more happy than sad, or the other way around (and i know you meant for it to be happy, but i coulnt help but see some sadness there too.)

it was really great. :)

Love bundi
shilohs.plume chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
wonderful, this is very well written and i enjoyed it a lot. good job.
OXBastetXO chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
That is so sweet and poignant! Wonderful job! You really captured the bitter-sweet of it!
AsanteSanaSquashBanana chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
this is really good... flawless...
roseperpetual chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
This is excellent- the last line made me smile. Edmund would love the rain because it's not cold enough to snow. Great job.
purple kimono chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
That was really sad and beautiful. It makes me think that Ed would have a melancholic smile when it rains...
FebruarySong chapter 1 . 6/7/2008
Very good. :)
redrose7856 chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
aw. that's cute. i like it!

~redrose7856
Sivaroobini Lupin-Black chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
This is beautiful. You captured the bonds between them beautifully, and the bonds between them and Narnia as well. Just... beautiful.

Hugs from a river god -
Lara86 chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
This was wonderful- I just love it!