|Reviews for Yellow Butterfly|
| Pearl Bramble of Willowbottom chapter 1 . 6/4/2013
This is very sad, and beautifully written, great job1 My only suggestion is that this category is for stories inspired by the 1995 A Little Princess movie, so I'd advise you to move your story to the songfic section. If you wrote a fantasy story, would you give it to a publisher which sells nonfiction books? It's like that.
| ZeDancingHobbit chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Um...nice story and all, but what does this have to do with A Little Princess? Go to FictionPress if you want to post original stories.
| Alice Of Wonderland chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Meanie! Now I can't stop crying!
| The Soapbox Writer chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
You realize that it's against the rules to post stories in the wrong category/website, right?
| Danni4ever chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Omg... I read the story but it didn't make me cry at first, but them I looked up the song on youtube and listened to it and thought about what the story said, and watched a little music video someone made I just started crying and couldn't stop!
Great job, and if I could rate, it'd be 5 stars. :)
| lovealways3 chapter 1 . 3/11/2009
I love it!
| ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 12/24/2008
A great story. Very good.
| Princess of Rose chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
It's beautiful. I love it, almos made me cry.
| JDKirkland00 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
wow, thats a really sad story...
| blu3j10 chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
:'( Its sad when i read this and listen to the song, nice job