Reviews for Six times Makino Tskushi was annoyingly late
ANIMANIAC chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
WELL TO FAST WHAT ABOUT ALL THE SUFFERING THE TENSE THE YOU KNOW YO SHOULD HAVE PUT WHEN TUKUSHI WAS HAVING MORNING SICKNESS AND WHEN TUKASA IS VERY WORRIED ALSO THE CLIMAX IS NOT NICE YOU SHOULD [UT SOME TENSE LIKE UNEXPECTED LABOR AND KEEP UP TENSE
kimchii chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
I loved this! Seriously!

I really enjoyed this. So good )

I hope to read more from you.
blueprincess16 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
haha

hilarious!

you've made me want to

start reading this series

thank you!

:D great job!
Devilishduck chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
LOL

Oh - tsukushi!

That last line was PERFECT

XD
magicaltrinity chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
This is so nice. And number 7 was my favorite part. I hope you make a multi-chapter story with the baby. Even with the 2nd and the 3rd for Sojiroh and Akira.

Rui was so adorable in the last part. I think he would make a great dad. Maybe you could write a story where all the F4's kids and their parents of course get together. :D good job! Keep up the good work!
missymace chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
funny!:) i would lurve it if this would be expanded and more detailed. :) i like how you write :)
Perilotte chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
That was sweet. Loved it.
Addie chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
I luv it! Da 1st one was so romantic n d last one was way funy! _
az09 chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
nice!

for p1 where makino is like "who's gettingmarried" while eating the snacks made me think that tsukasa like hid the ring in the cake and she ate it LOL.
lhotshot83 chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
i liked it, this was so sweet, i like how you kept all the characters insync with themselves
anime07 chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
This fanfic is really cute! I hope you will make another HYD fic!