|Reviews for Death Most Desired|
| Gillian Aubrey chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
I liked it, you did it in a way that made it beautiful and not smutty...good job! )
| laura lou who chapter 1 . 3/3/2010
I've read another story where they both died but it ended when they met in heaven. I like this, not as sad. They both end up blissfully happy. I prefer happy endings.
| TwerdLife chapter 1 . 3/1/2010
aw\that is sad
yet so beautiful
especially the last part "they never woke again"
thats REALLY great writting
| harajuku7 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Dang man, I feel like a freaking baby bawling over this but it was so beautiful and sad and thoughtful and made you wish you had love like edward and bella. good job
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
| Mackbaby chapter 1 . 2/5/2010
That's how it really should be. Great job! :)
| Melissa300 chapter 1 . 2/3/2010
That was great!
| WithoutLove.LifeIsLike chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Sad but good :)
| fall-princess chapter 1 . 12/24/2009
aw so sweet it almost made me cry lol
| Sarah chapter 1 . 12/3/2009
I LOVED thi ending so much. So sweet and fluffy!
| MindyKnotts chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
that was excellent. It was sad in the beginning, but very beautiful in the end, i like to think that is exactly how it would have happened if that were the circumstances. You did a wonderful job writing this. Off to your page to catch more of your stories.
| musicismyedward chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
Hmm very interesting...your idea is great. I love it. It's kind of depressing but in a happy way...if that makes sense! You're very talented at writing and don't give up like I did
| ggfjgjhg chapter 1 . 10/25/2009
it was pretty fucked up how they both just DIED at the end. what the hell?
| Sattinson chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Beautiful...but sad...in a poetic way.
| Lori94 chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Very interesting idea!