|Reviews for Blackout|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/8
Do u have this point from Seth's view when they jump in to help bella?
| Guest chapter 7 . 12/14/2019
I was creaming into my pillow that was an amazing plot twist! Your such a good writer!
| Busybee9 chapter 21 . 5/26/2019
Great twist. Well done.
| Raven J. Haile chapter 21 . 2/21/2019
It was marvelous, simply marvelous. :3
| OMG chapter 21 . 1/29/2019
| Guest chapter 8 . 11/9/2018
Just a heads up; I know this is fiction but you are able to see a baby’s heartbeat way before 3 months...
| Disneylover0415 chapter 14 . 7/5/2018
hey, I know this story is completed but I was reading your comment to be people about reviews and just wanted to say way to go. I love ur spunk and how u told people off without being a jerk I completely agree with u, its ur story and its great! ...so just my to sense there
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/24/2017
Why dis you write half of Chapter 3 in italics
| cela chapter 8 . 11/3/2015
give the baby to rose!
| jk chapter 19 . 3/8/2015
i thought they were vampires? why is Tanya still alive?
| jk chapter 16 . 3/8/2015
that last sentence about her never feeling so alone in her entire life
fuck drama queen much...its not like kate,rose,and alice aren't right there you stupid ass!
but really they should have told her that jake was coming...shes known him all her life, she knows him better then anyone and it was soo fucked that they didn't tell her...I would have made them tell me but bellas a stupid little victim...and AND if some whore...yes tanyas a whore was constantly on my husbads jock I would put her in her place...its really surprising that Edward is always polite to Tanya youd think that if he loved his wife he would want her to not have to feel uncomfortable...so youd think he'd put a stop to the whore ya know?
like I don't know raise his fucking voice "look, im never gonna fuck you whore, why would I want to go where...everyone...has gone before? your just a used up sperm dumpster! quit trying to get to my dick you trifling bitch its not gonna happen!"
just an idea
| jk chapter 14 . 3/8/2015
id like to point out that my reviews may seem mean...bt I assure you when im freaking out and cussing...im cussing at the characters not the writer...im just passionate about reading!
im totally disappointed that its a girl
and I don't get why esme and rose are all happy that bellas leaving them with her kid...cause they would have been around it anyways...its not like bellas giving them the baby...their not gonna be mommys ya know...so I really don't understand why their acting like its the greatest gift in the world...I don't know
| jk chapter 13 . 3/8/2015
you make the baby a human just so bella can leave it with rose and esme? wtf why not just leave it a werewolf then she could raise it not only would she not have t leave cause it would smell lol so she wouldn't want to eat it...it could also be a kind of bridge/link to the other werewolves...they could make a stronger pact with them ya know...orrrr why not just have it be Edwards for real...since bellas so fuckin strange anyway
I just don't feel like this was planned out well I guess
| jk chapter 9 . 3/8/2015
honestly I thought the way bella "askd" Edward to be Jacobs babies father was fucking rude as shit
I know I was raped and you never thought about having a baby expcially one that isn't your but.."i consider this baby to be yours too and we are married..."
how about.."i know this is a surprise Edward but as it is im going to be a mother and id really like it if you would consider being this babies father...would you?"
then she wouldn't come off as a cunt
| jk chapter 8 . 3/8/2015
its alittle unbelievable no? the venom cancelled out the werewolf dna..so the baby is fatherless...um ya ok...and carlise just guessed that..lol how the fuck could he guess that...even a werewolf baby would have a heartbeat sooooo please tell me how he figured that shit out...sorry but that was fuckin stupid on your part