Reviews for The Rebuke
rosebudmelissa chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
I'm in awe of how you write Mustang. You really capture his scheming, chessmaster side, his ability to take a terrible situation and turn it to his own advantage. And I love the subtle, wicked sense of humor you give him. So much fun!
Lyikael chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
*snickers* he probably did so, yes.

Lol nice ! I really liked it :)

thanks for writing!
mehj chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
"Stop sla-a-acking,"

I should say the same to myself XD.

"Whoever loses has to clean the lavatory stalls, and whoever wins gets to do my laundry."

I don't know what worse here, losing or winning? hahaha

i love reading slices-of-fma-military-life :D
DutchCherry12 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
that was good!
Jessi Tsuki chapter 1 . 7/25/2008
Well done. . I love military-centric fics. Thank you for writing this.
Anne Packrat chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Nicely done, a good example of how the colonel can be competent when he needs to be.