|Reviews for My Pen Pal|
| cherryrose89 chapter 29 . 12/25/2013
Cute story! :) I loved it
| TopazGirl96 chapter 28 . 11/3/2013
| Booknotes chapter 14 . 7/20/2013
My favorite song is I'm in Love With a Fairtale by Alexander Rybak. Amazing! But I can't believe she loves that good-for-nothin Mike Newton! He obviously had been hanging out with Jessica at the meet... Right? I mean come on, they were having a conversation and he sees something and has to go? Ughhhh. And he judged her based on a book Edward wanted to borrow. He... Ugh. Asshole. Even if he did make up for it with a dinner... He's such a kiss-up for waiting that late. Can you say needy? Hah. Anyway. I love this so far... I really wanna punch him in the face. And then (if I were Bella) kiss him right in front of him. Sounds bitchy but... Come on.
| Booknotes chapter 8 . 7/20/2013
My opinion of Mike Newton still hasn't changed. Before I hated him because he is such a needy little puppy... Now I hate him because he's a thumb-sucking asshole! Edward can clearly make her feel better than that "vile Mike Newton" and I'm glad. Obviously his a little prick who loves his parents too much. Asshole.
...You're doing great by the way! *goofy smile with thumbs up*
| Xx.WildAtHeart.xX chapter 28 . 5/26/2013
I have spent the entire day reading this story. Literally, I found it in the morning and haven't put it down all day. It's practically midnight now. My eyes nearly popped out my head when I saw the word sequel! I loved this story! You're an amazing writer and the plot line was great, everything felt real. If that makes sense? Off to find the sequel! Thanks for a great story! I loved every second of it! ;)
| FreakyTwilightGirl chapter 14 . 1/4/2013
I don't understand! Bella forgot it was their anniversary, but she didn't know about the dinner! Soo?
| FreakyTwilightGirl chapter 12 . 1/3/2013
I actually took me 45 mins to read this when it usually takes me 10 mins to read a chapter!:-D
| FreakyTwilightGirl chapter 9 . 1/3/2013
I didn't understand the Mike thing, still love the story!
| FreakyTwilightGirl chapter 8 . 1/2/2013
I kinda like the MXB relationship, but now i think he is a jerk!
| jess 'twilight matrix chapter 28 . 12/16/2012
Aww! I just found this story yesterday and it was so good! I loved it. I seriously thought Jake was going to try and pursue Bella and then turn into a love triangle story...but happy it didn't. lol Great job with the story! :)
| LucyMJ chapter 29 . 10/11/2012
i love the way you started it but i though it was a Bella and Edward story. it turn out to be a Bella ff with so little Edward in it...and a really weak one. i was kind of desapointed.
i was glad that Alice an Jasper get together, but i was waiting a little bit more of them as a couple.
i like the way you handle emmet and rosalie and i hope the sequel told more about the other couples...
| she.s.a.shy.one chapter 12 . 4/30/2012
So I know this is already finished but I just had to write this in. When I saw this sentence, I'm ashamed to say I was only half paying attention and instead of it coming out like this:
"Edward's leap had been huge, at least another foot and a half longer than Mike's. I was very impressed, but tried not to show it."
It came out like this:
"Edward's had been huge, at least another foot and a half longer than Mike's. I was very impressed, but tried not to show it."
My revolting mind filled in the blank and I just about laughed my head off.
Thanks for the story, it's hilarious all the way through.
| Nolan Ithaca chapter 7 . 10/22/2011
6 inch meatball sub. that's the last thing I ate. it was goooooooooooood. :D
| Nolan Ithaca chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
by the end of this chapter i was actually feeling hungry. lol
| Emma Winslow chapter 4 . 8/2/2011
i already love this story and i just started! great job im adding this to alerts and fav.. pleasecheck out my only story, yes Bella's ONLY story... haha, i just started on here though ive known about it for awhile. so love it