Reviews for That Darned Cat
Hercules8 chapter 1 . 1/12/2018
This is a very nice and sweet story. Great job! :3
WitsWithMe chapter 1 . 9/6/2017
Nothing like a cat to fix up the aggressive chicks. XD

This was a great read. Thank you, TV Tropes!
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 1 . 6/7/2017
Hey, very cool one, and yeah, it was about time that the girls realized that most of their problems with Keitaro are actually their own fault.

Keep the good writing.
ChronoTriggerMan chapter 1 . 3/9/2017
Cat story is best story.
SomebodyLost chapter 1 . 1/22/2017
Even though I don't like KeiNaru fics, I do love this because character development! It's actually impressive that you did this without too much bashing on the girls. :D

Thanks for writing! Now I'm gonna check on my Neko Atsume app again. :3
Quis Custodiet chapter 1 . 5/8/2016
I really love reading well constructed one-shots, particularly when they have a captivating opening and a nice feeling of closure. This one pretty much hit all the right notes for me and I think even gave me a few ideas of my own.

Also, I don't know why people hate Keitaro/Naru fictions. I think maybe too many people have watched the anime instead of reading the manga and in the anime there is a fair degree of flanderization going on in regards to Naru's comedic punching of Keitaro. Anyway, it certainly didn't detract from my enjoyment of the story and I thought Naru was presented well enough for me to enjoy that type of denouement.

Thanks for the great read.
swartzvald chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
It's true, cats are awesome.
SoaringEagle13 chapter 1 . 7/1/2014
A very humorous fic of Love Hina to enjoy. To think that a cat would be Keitaro's savior. I could only imagine if Akamatsu were to make a non-canon piece similar to this. Personally, I don't mind a Kei/Naru fic unlike some people around here. Even though I don't dislike Naru, I still find her tsun tsun habits to be very annoying. That especially goes to her anime incarnation.
Maxmanatarms chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Simple cute realistic in the hina world and ours. Wonderful. A favorite to be sure
Ashleythetiger chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
that was good

I wonder if that cat is proberly Toiltir (a fictional fanon cat-god-thingy appears in random Fanon is god of mischief i think) well that was my 1st thought

seems to fix the girls... namely Naru an Motoko yah need a dose of hard love... before they change there ways
mnementh2000 chapter 1 . 1/30/2012
By the way your story goes and progresses, I would assume you are an avid cat person. You have captured their personality and action perfectly!
Gundam Kaiser chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Well, this was nice and amusing. And Naru's harsh a lot of the time, but as far as the Tsunderes I've seen go, she's not too bad. At least, unlike Asuka, she HAS a sweet side that lasts longer than a split-second.
Samhan chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
I like this story, & why everyone hate Naru, if she change her behavior she'll lovely girl. YET she need Keitaro's love so she will not lost
Ninja on the Roof chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
Yowza! A cat succeeding were a certain fox has failed, bringing Naru the fireball and Keitaro the shmuck closer than ever... and not intentionally too.

Who woulda thunk it?

Great piece o' literary work
Doctor-T chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
At last, something different!

The animals in 'Love Hina' are rarely the main subject in any fanfiction, mores the pity. Having this story revolve around a cat was a nice touch.

Hm? I wonder how Oni would get on with Kuro?

Especially if Kanako arrived and made a play for Keitaro while he's dating Naru?

Actually, that wouldn't make a bad story, with each pet trying to sabotage the opposing girl's romantic efforts.
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