Reviews for Before He Had Golden Eyes
xxMidniteShadowsxx chapter 5 . 6/30/2008
Uh Oh! She found him with Bella! You should make it so She meets Jacob in La Push. With the rest of the pack
xxMidniteShadowsxx chapter 4 . 6/27/2008
What happened to Helen? Did she die? Oh well. Edward as a newborn is pretty cool to read about!
someone chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
I take it Helen is suposed to look at least a little like Bella, so that she will be more Edwards "type"?

Very good, Keep going!
yahoo-chloe chapter 4 . 6/26/2008
I loved that last sentence in chapter four- a beautiful way to describe it! I really loved this idea, though you're right about how this site doesn't let you separate the parts with stars etc. so that made it slightly confusing. Anyway, a really nice idea about him having a fiancée before, it'll be nice to see how that pans out. Luck x
xxMidniteShadowsxx chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
Wow! Can't wait for more!
twilightroxmysoxforever chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
this is super good write more!
Bartbc chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
More! More! I can hardly wait to find out what happens next! Nice job of getting the reader (me)interested! You have a very smooth writing style which makes your story easy to read. I liked your use of descriptive words and the way your words convey a scene.

I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
xxMidniteShadowsxx chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
O! I LOVED it! Write another chapter please!