|Reviews for Lucivar's Daughter|
| CarlitaM chapter 16 . 2/15
Hope you write more, it's building up to be very interesting. I want to read the confrontation! That'll be great. Also, you have a great grasp on, i don't know how to describe it exactly... the *flow*? The tone? i don't know. But it reads as a BJT story, and not a cheap copy. Very well done indeed.
| kiera-sama chapter 16 . 2/7
Have you given up on this story? If so, that's quite a shame. I really like it and hope you plan to continue it.
| Ebony chapter 16 . 11/30/2013
Come on! Update! UPDATE! UPDATE!
| Guest chapter 16 . 10/7/2013
Hurry up and finish the story. It's a blast. You have a good sense of your characters and picked an interesting side story to elaborate on.
| NewReader chapter 16 . 6/16/2013
Keep going! I'm liking this story...the tone is very close to the actual canon.
| Guest chapter 16 . 5/2/2013
More please :)
| LuciannaBelladonna chapter 16 . 4/30/2013
Oh my goodness, I couldn't stop reading once I started. XD
| mischy22 chapter 16 . 4/26/2013
very good so far ... do update soon
| Guest chapter 16 . 4/17/2013
Thoughts and opinions:
I like the story and its direction.
You dont post new chapters nearly often enough.
I am not familiar enough with fan fiction to know how pedantic I should get regarding style of writing. Will say your style is 'unconventional'. But not so much so I can not enjoy the story.
Looking forward to the next installments.
| Xenon Shield chapter 16 . 3/30/2013
Though I'm usually a little suspicious when it comes to TBJ fanfictions, since the story's simply too complicated for most writers, I really came to like yours, and those characters of yours. I can't even say, "Especially Kavan", because all of them are quite refreshing in their own ways.
Thank you for writing this story and uploading it, and I'm excited to see where it will lead us.
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/20/2013
I really love the story and I think you've done a good job of getting the characters down perfectly. I really hope you have the time to update soon. Thanks.
| mabpagan chapter 16 . 2/27/2013
This is really well done-you've captured the essence of the Eyrien character in Sirian! (Makes me think of what Surreal would be like if she were Eyrien...)
Anyway, lovely plot-I'm looking forward to her meeting the rest of the family! Thank you for writing such an interesting story!
| xDeathQueenx chapter 16 . 2/15/2013
Thanks for this! I like how even if you don't get another chapter up to continue with the story you still get up a little back story. I'm still totally looking forward to seeing the meeting between Sirian and Lucivar. :D (Also I thought your joke about "past tense vs. intense" was very punny!)
| fetherhd chapter 16 . 2/14/2013
AH had to go back and read your comments. Great little side piece!
| LaRire chapter 15 . 2/11/2013
Wow, things are heating up. _ Love all the updates! Keep it up!