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QGTheEletricGawd chapter 8 . 2/19
This chapter seems like an episode of 24 when David divorced sherry
Guest chapter 33 . 1/13
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naruobsessed chapter 33 . 12/21/2016
please finish this, there may be problems but nobody is perfect and I would really like to see this story through
Polaruspax chapter 4 . 12/7/2016
God you really have no idea how bad this is? You have him getting kidnapped and now you have hinata getting stole too? and you have naruto turned into some slave that fights? how the fuck did he even know about naruto in the first place? you have so many plot holes and retarded ideas im shocked that this is still even here.
Polaruspax chapter 3 . 12/7/2016
Yea this is shit... the whole fucking idea of this is bad and you should delete this story.
moka1023 chapter 33 . 10/27/2016
This is an awesome story. Even though it doesn't seem that it will be finished I have recommended my friends read it. you've done a great job. Thanks for sharing.
moka1023 chapter 13 . 10/15/2016
I really enjoy this story. It is very well written, in keeping with the time it is set in and is keeping me guessing. I. truly enjoy your writing and am going to check out some of your other stories. Keep doing what you're doing.. It's awesome.
LordGraygem chapter 33 . 12/22/2015
Excellent story, with great pacing and plot. Unfortunate that the author seems to have abandoned it (and his other as well), hope he's alright.
TitanSteel chapter 1 . 7/30/2015
very vague, you almost did not gave away any information. and that made me curious as hell...
covain chapter 33 . 6/2/2015
Is anymore of this going to be written
JAYSEN chapter 1 . 5/13/2015
I actually read this a while back but it took forever to find again. I really liked it and this fic heavily reminded me of the movie Unleashed with Jet Li.
naruXino chapter 30 . 3/30/2015
just a lil peice of advice morning sicness doesnt start till the second trimester
patrick.hohenstein.94 chapter 7 . 5/8/2014
Sôooooooooo sad but I love this series
Sparity101 chapter 33 . 4/24/2014
Come on. bring on the next chapter soon.
KnighteWolfe chapter 33 . 12/31/2013
Cant wait until the next chapter.
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