Reviews for The Ball is in Your Court, Ms Potts
Nat D chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Loved it. Loooooved. It.

Great job!
Amber-Jade James chapter 1 . 6/13/2008
Really good storie!

i like the idea behind it :~)

Good job!

Cheers

AJ
JO chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Hope you intend to write more , you really have their personalities down pat , very good, please write more.
The Pirate's Paw chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
A very possible outcome of events with these two. While they are like oil and vinegar, shaken up at the moment needed to blend, they blend beautifully.
Marchioness of Blackadder chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
I really ejoyed this peice. You captured the two characters promptly. I found it interesting, too, how you made a dynamic character such as Tony still seem static with his regular personality. You should consider continuing this! It's brilliant! I went to go see the movie a second time for writing purposes- and I used my mother as an excuse ;D
sarafina chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
hey

great start i hope there is more to this story. i would love for them to get together in the next chapter
Twisted Cinderella chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Brilliant, brilliant! I loved it! Tony sure told Pepper off D I liked the way you made him so strong and firm, so sure of himself. Cannot wait for the prequel and looking forward to your future stories D
Dicta Licence chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Prequel, sequel. Doesn't matter to me what you write, I'll definitely read it because this, quite frankly, is amazing.
Tiresius69 chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Wow. That started out with a blast alright. Enjoyed the dialogue and liked the cliffhanger ending. Looking forward to the next scene. I like how Pepper's the one making the ultimate decision. I like my Pepper as the Boss, indeed...
midnightrose45 chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Please let there be a sequel!I can't wait to find out what Pepper's gonna do in this little game her and Tony are playing.
Quicksilvermad chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
O! This is nice. I can't wait to read the prequel (and sequel? Please?). You've got their voices down perfectly.
Redlioness62 chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
You really should continue this for at least 2 more chapters! Very good writing.
theartistformerlyknownaswmlaw chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Oh... that was good! Tony's speech hot!
MagicalMe5 chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
What a well-written, story! You handled these characters brilliantly! I loved the diaogue.

I am looking forward to the prequel (and, perhaps, the sequel as well?).

- M*Me
ancarett chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
Tony never lets it go when he wants something. I love the way that he's going after Pepper, here!
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