|Reviews for AntiWings|
| totally confused chapter 1 . 3/27
I don't get it
| BlaackPepper chapter 1 . 2/7/2015
Holy shit. This story gave me the feels. Part of me is sad, while the other is kinda.. Man, I can't even describe it. I'm completely touched though.
| mnl chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
this is beautiful 3
| Nicole chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
This is so emotionally amazing. I really feel their hearts. It's amazing.
| floating on clouds above chapter 1 . 8/25/2014
I love how you wrote this. :)
| stars shine out chapter 1 . 6/3/2013
Absolutely fantastic, this is incredible.
| it would be reyna chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
omg. this story though. it's tragic and beautiful and ajdhahda feels
| A.Rose.Love chapter 1 . 7/29/2012
This is beautiful. Honestly, this has to be my absolute favorite piece on this site.
They way you wrote this, using just enough words to illustrate your point without going overboard. It's beautiful.
I absolutely love the way you're using these characters. The way you're portraying them. Tenten and Neji, I can imagine it perfectly. Sakura just wanting to fly. I can relate to that so well, just wanting to be able to fly away from this life. Sasuke was amazing as well. Amazing and caring in his own way. The line with him blooming? Completely brilliant. Amazing, I don't have enough positive words to describe this.
Legitimately, I always happen to stumble upon this fic, I haven't been able to remember the title (I read it years ago before I had an account) But I've always remembered it. It's a wonderful piece, completely astonishing. I love it and thank you for it.
| ehjayred chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Wow. That was...wow. Youre published, right? How could you not be...
| LovexxxSakuraUchiha chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
Angsty but beautiful
| Crazy Cherries chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
It's beautiful, that's all I have to say about it.
Although, I do wonder whatever happened to Sakura if Sasuke made it to the Angel status, at first I thought she was the teenager but then he stared "into her ice blue eyes" so I know it's not her.
Anyway, it is unconventional, but brilliant at the same time.
She who also wanted to fly once upon a time.
| Animelover351 chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
This story is one of the best. U should be proud:)
| Sapherindrial chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
absolutely beautiful...i love it.
| Anonymous chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
I loved this story. :) It has such a unique perspective on the people in rehab and the IDEA of flying. Brilliant and indescribable (in a good way, of course). And the beginning and end parts in italics are so unrelated, yet so fitting. This is like one of those tragically beautiful fanfics because in the end...they got their happy ending...theirs wings, neh? :)
'Humans can't fly'
'How do you know?'
| A note to CRITICS UNITED chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I'm posting this here since her anon reviews are disabled
Wow, amazing... just amazing Cha's Aegis or whatever that fat bitch's name is, has now resolved to bullying people online instead of school, I know where you live also I know you worked at Chaparall Middle School one of my friends you already know who she is : Claire, remember her?
You really hurt her feelings that day, it's not her fault people made fun of her you're supposed to help people with their problems not just tell them to 'deal with it' I'm glad the principal fired you and I hope you're homeless on the streets. Atleast he had some inkling as to why Claire came crying to him that day, he was kind enough to listen to her and understand the whole bullying situation, so Sally used to be a bit fat back then well guess what? She's not now, she can fit into a size 2. That day when those guys were bullying her you just laughed, seriously? IT WASN'T CLAIRE'S FAULT SHE WAS BORN THAT WAY! I'm glad the principal fired you because you totally deserved it you egoistic cunt.
Just because someone is "different" or "ugly"/"Unattractive" does not give you any fucking right to make their lives miserable or laugh at them when they come to you for help. Of course people like you who were raised thinking that only attractive people deserve to be treated right wouldn't understand that.
I know how you look like too, you weren't exactly 'skinny' yourself either. Pathetic and Racist - the only words to describe you, remember when you assumed Sally was a Muslim? When she was really an Atheist? People used to bully her over that all the fucking time before they made an seminar in the class explaining the differences between Islam, Judaism, Christianity, Hinduism, etc... Remember that girl who pushed you over the stairs? The really gorgeous one? That was my girlfriend, Claire. Now, she's lost weight,a lot smarter than you will ever be, and was accepted into a good college. Admittedly she's a lot more attractive than you.
The thing is... if you keep judging people by their looks things aren't going to work for you. Instead of writing fan fiction you should be looking for a job or atleast ATTEMPTING TO. Of course with you 'people' that's a complete alien concept. 6th - 7th.. It really wasn't Claire's fault as to why she was the way she was, we all go through a stupid stage in our lives, so Sally was a bit different, she didn't like going to dances, that doesn't mean you have to treat her like dirt! Thanks to her English teacher she's alive today! She had a lot of problems going on at home with her parent's divorce and all.
The lady gave Claire enough confidence to CONTINUE HER LIFE. SHE TOLD HER THAT SHE COULD BE ANYTHING, SOMETHING! SHE WAS SMART, SHE WAS PRETTY AND A BRILLIANT STUDENT!
Unlike you - a conflict mediator who doesn't even settle conflicts but instigates them instead! I hope you are living homeless on the streets the way you deserve to! You overweight, illegal immigrant!
If it weren't for me and her teacher Claire would have been dead as of now. Honestly I don't know why you and your little group are patrolling the site like a bunch of Nazis, instead of reporting the stories why not just direct them to a website like Quizilla? Script is totally allowed there and so are song fics.
Now for the other reason I'm here:
Also, thanks to you my favorite authors: SummerCat9,Lady Natalie,Mjm Chan, Melanie Sky have stopped posting stories. Hell, SummerCat9 abandoned her account! Because you kept flaming her story "Out of Spite" there was NOTHING wrong with that story the last time I checked it, it was a simple story about a girl named Adelei and The Mole and how they help Thrax, everything was spelled correctly, it wasn't a song - fic or even a script! , nor was it breaking ANY RULE WHATSO FUCKING EVER! Because of you guys going around hurting people's feelings instead of redirecting them to appropriate sites, they've abandoned their accounts. Thanks a fucking lot cunt..
BUT: I DO UNDERSTAND IF YOU'RE GOING AFTER RULE BREAKING STORIES! But reporting a story ( THAT ISN'T BREAKING ANY RULES) just because you don't like it/the pairing/etc, doesn't really make any sense, if you don't like reading after the first time then just fucking don't bother looking at it ever again! And just to let you know :Summer DID have a BETA! In-fact, Summer has BETA'D many stories herself. Thanks a lot you fucking losers thanks to you Out of Spite is GONE! GONE! Summer abandoned her account and probably won't write anything ever again! Thank goodness she still responds by PM,but she's lost the confidence to do anything! Yeah, She did have SOME grammar errors, but THIS ISN'T A PROFESSIONAL WRITING WEBSITE! EVERYONE IS BOUND TO MAKE A COUPLE ERRORS! Summer is NOT a troll, she was just writing a simple story "Out of Spite" for fun, but you guys had to come along and bitch at her for it. I mean yeah her story at the first chapter was confusing but since everything HAS to be perfect for you losers you reported it anyway! I'm not sure if the admins removed it or she did herself, but ALL her stories are GONE. This started when she got a review from one of your members bitching at her for grammar ( guess what though?) her grammar was PERFECT. Yeah, so the formatting was fucked up, blame the site for that not her, she uses Windows 7 ( or I think she does). She DID fix the formatting and everything, her fans are pretty disappointed that the story is taken down, there weren't many reviews on it since nowadays only shit - fics with neko -cunt/girls. get more reviews than anything else. Out Of Spite was a very unique story, it had reviews it was still getting reviews too. But some people just enjoyed nitpicking at the tiniest grammar mistakes for example the word "Color" is spelled "COLOR" in AMERICA. In the UK it's spelled - "COLOUR". Sorry Summer is from AMERICA and not UK. So she's going to spell COlOR like COLOR. It's not the right spelling for UK but Summer's not from UK so she will spell it however she fucking pleases. One of your members "Ness .. whatever" bitched about that. Summer told her to fuck off as any person would for being ranted at about such a simple mistake. Soon she grew tired of it and decided to stop updating for awhile.
Eventualy Summer decided to call it quits and abandoned her account, I still don't know who took down the stories, Summer or the Admins. The last time I checked the motto of this site was "Unleash Your Imagination" not "Oppress and Dictate"
I seriously hope you guys die or get killed.