Reviews for She's Royal
BITTENEV chapter 3 . 6/17/2008
SO good! I'm a little worried about Nalani putting that flower behind her hair. Is alice going to think she is the girl and try to push edward on her. Ah that batter not happen. And how is edward going to find bella again. Man you have to update soon!
KRC81 chapter 2 . 6/16/2008
Cute story! Can't wait for more!
SillyLily619 chapter 2 . 6/16/2008

It was a very catchy story. I really liked it.

Could you add more soon...Please!

I'm dying of the wait...!
Carden88 chapter 2 . 6/16/2008
Interesting 'meet-cute'. I'm ready for more! :)
Carden88 chapter 1 . 6/16/2008
Really cute beginning.
BellaLandaeta chapter 2 . 6/16/2008
I really like this story! Please update when you can. D
tophat1918 chapter 2 . 6/16/2008
i like this a lot since i'm really pale like Edward and i burn very easily.
dallasmeetsjersey chapter 2 . 6/16/2008
THAT was classic. go bella! i never would have guessed that was coming haha.
smilelikeacullen chapter 2 . 6/16/2008
I loved this chapter, what a wonderful way for them to meet, very poetic in a way, a life threating scary thing, and bella saved edward, i love it! Can't wait for you to update!
Thissiteislame chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
You seriously have a talent for writing. Wow. I can't wait for this to be updated!
latuacantante4him chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
Can't wait for more.
edwardandbellabelong2gether chapter 2 . 6/15/2008
Great chapter!
neeshanox chapter 2 . 6/14/2008
that was soo CUTE.

I loved it. Another chapter please?
doreansmomma chapter 2 . 6/13/2008
LOL..."And another one bit the dust." LOL That line got me rolling on the floor! And then, when Emmett said, "He's too pretty. I think if Jasper and I broke his nose, he had more luck with the ladies." I laughed out so loud that my Chihauhau, Sweetie, jumped in the air 3 feet because I scared her!

I loved that Edward met Bella on top of that rock where she helped him jump off romantic!
dbert chapter 2 . 6/13/2008
That was adorable! I love it.
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