Reviews for She's Royal
Just Sus chapter 5 . 6/14/2013
They are forging a very strange relationship, at this point. They are so comfortable with each other, but where are the fireworks? I'm sure they'll be coming...

Just Sus chapter 3 . 6/14/2013
Stupid man! He should have gotten her number or something!
Just Sus chapter 2 . 6/14/2013
See, Edward did it all on his own! Meeting Bella!
Just Sus chapter 1 . 6/14/2013
interesting...why did Alice black out?
Halo221 chapter 20 . 6/12/2013
Very sweet ending
Halo221 chapter 13 . 6/12/2013
A year?
Halo221 chapter 9 . 6/11/2013
Well, I guess I need to retract my praise for Bella's honesty. I know why Edward's keeping some secrets, but I cannot understand Bella's insistence on pretending everything is fine but inside assuming the worst about Edward. Why would you let someone lie to you in such a terrible way? Why not confront and clarify? Grrrr!
Halo221 chapter 8 . 6/11/2013
Finally some honesty from Bella!
Halo221 chapter 7 . 6/11/2013
I'm really enjoying this story, but I'm pretty much hating the lines taken from the original book. I don't feel they fit and instead of harking back to canon in a positive way, they feel out of place and like they were used more for the sake of pulling from canon instead of actually being purposeful and benefitting the story.
Halo221 chapter 6 . 6/11/2013
Now we're making some progress!
Halo221 chapter 5 . 6/10/2013
See, this is where Bella and I differ. I would've just told him at the beginning that I saw him the night before at the club and that it seemed he'd hit it off with the other girl, so I'd expected that to be the end of our visits. I wouldn't say I'd gone there looking for him, but that was the club my friends and I preferred on the island. It's like he's being (more or less) open and honest and consistent in his words and actions and she's not. I don't see why she's making things so much harder than they need to be.
Halo221 chapter 4 . 6/10/2013
I'm a bit mad at Bella for being such a coward, at the club and especially the next day. But the supernatural element to this story is very interesting!
Halo221 chapter 3 . 6/10/2013
I see what you did there! Very clever! ;)
Halo221 chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
Halo221 chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
Interesting start!
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