|Reviews for Moving On?|
| LWillow chapter 21 . 5/22/2012
I loved this until the last two chapters. As a mother, I can tell you that you go to hell and back for your children. Child triumphs spouse, always. If a mother does not feel that way, she has no business having a child. I feel that Bella would put her child first.
| Nurseratchet chapter 21 . 8/4/2010
This was a very well written story. You are a talented writer. That being said, I have no respect for a woman who chooses a man over her child, I think they are pretty darn low. I absolutely hated Anna Karenina for this reason. I know Edward is awesome but I wouldn't give up my child even for him. The pack had no right to ask her to never have any contact with him. You mentioned a sequel, any plans for that still?
| OverInked chapter 20 . 12/14/2009
okay, that is just crazy unrealistic. Bella would never agree to either of those. edward would fight for her and the probably wouldnt want jacob in the babbies lige in the first place. hate your story line, but your writing is descent.
| LanternLight13 chapter 21 . 11/6/2009
This story was well written, and the story line was great. I couldn't stop reading.
| Doork chapter 21 . 8/21/2009
Omgoosh, i would of never given up the baby, i cried so much at the last 2 chapters!
| SomaAngel chapter 21 . 5/14/2009
I absolutely love this story ... The cliffhangers made me read it in just 2 days - and I should've been working :O
| twilightCrAzYBobO101 chapter 21 . 3/7/2009
OMG i have to know the sequel to moving on i'm going crazy. Whats the title to the next book AH
| TheCullensareAwesome chapter 21 . 2/16/2009
Aw poor cole :(
| TheCullensareAwesome chapter 3 . 2/15/2009
| jovyp chapter 21 . 2/15/2009
wow great story,
so many twist.
i cant wait for the sequel when will you start writing it.
| In Need Of Spaceheater chapter 5 . 1/26/2009
hey this is great so far but it is a pack not a pact. lol but i really think ur writing is great! I know im going to enjoy the whole story im only on chapter 5 right now i just recently found this website! Great job so far
| Mogood chapter 21 . 1/1/2009
Okay...I considered to stop reading after chapter 10 but I must admit it was a good story eventhough I'm a proud member of team Jacob. I was actually satisfied with Jacob imprinting and I thought they would end up being one big weird extended family, but when Bella decided to give up her child for a man! You completely loss me, that was too far fetched. I know Stephanie Meyer showed how selfish Bella was in the series but this is a whole new low. Sorry the ending of the story ruined it for me.
| T3am Switzerland chapter 21 . 12/27/2008
I love your story! It was awesome!
| Heather Frost chapter 21 . 12/26/2008
This story is so amazing! I have read alot of twilight Fan fiction and i have to tell you, this is the first story that actually made me cry! I am sitting in front of my computer, glued to the screen with Kleenex and tears streaming down my face. My daughter was laughing at me for crying until I told her why. I had wondered how you were gonna pull that off since he would most deffinately become a werewolf being raised by vampires. That would become quite awkward. Thank you for this story! I am very very impressed. If a story brings out this kind of emotions from me it is really really good!
Thank you! and by the way this is coming from a Team Jacob reader.
| EVWTForever chapter 21 . 12/24/2008
aw, that was a good ending! Even if Bella's sad now, she'll be happy soon! I can't wait for the sequel!