|Reviews for Beast Unleashed|
| mudpuddledemon chapter 2 . 9/5/2012
| TwilghtEyes85 chapter 2 . 6/16/2011
This is really good. Well written and in character. I can totally see Riddick doing this
| RatedRGirl83 chapter 2 . 5/1/2011
Very nicely done. I want to know what happens when she turns 18 *Wink*
| Trilogy1 chapter 2 . 4/28/2011
is there a sequel?
| kstar26 chapter 2 . 1/23/2010
Riddick, a man of paitence? Who'da guessed? Ah well, 18 equals everything for them. Great story.
| Kizzy Bloom chapter 2 . 11/16/2008
This is very good, you did a good job with the torture scene. I was very that Riddick found Jack, it made me happy w
| nonhalema chapter 2 . 11/14/2008
Very catching writing...
| Super-girl-straight-from-hell chapter 2 . 10/15/2008
Nice. Not the most graphic thing I've read ... try the Joker for that. But nice ending.
| Riddick's Sita chapter 2 . 10/13/2008
You have to continue the story...and I prefer Riddick's POV...I like how you write about his feelings without making him out of character
| Racetrack1899 chapter 2 . 6/18/2008
Wonderful,wonderful character developement and thought processing. This is the Riddick that I love reading about- because I truly believe the character is dark, battling the ideas of common human emotions which Jack brings out of him. Would be awesome if you decided to continue with the story.
| MorgansBabyGrl chapter 2 . 6/12/2008
O! I liked it! More More!
| Extant chapter 2 . 6/9/2008
Give us some back story! A flashback or something! How did they get to be together? Why are they waiting till she's 18? ? I'm very curious now.
| 19LoVeSpeLL93 chapter 2 . 6/9/2008
wow...luved it plez keep going w/ it ]
| whitelite chapter 2 . 6/9/2008
I really like the contrast here, between the brutal torture and the gentle way he cares for Jack. Between the opening lines- "It's been three days since I've seen her. Kissed her, touched her." ect., and some of the later stuff, you make it sound like she's some kind of addiction to him, like a drug. It's an interesting concept. I can't wait to read more.
| Honey76 chapter 2 . 6/9/2008
So you add a deeper emotion to him. Not that I think he is not capable of that but it is nice to read it. And its cute to see how he takes care of her.
And I really would LOVE to read the next part ;-)