|Reviews for Goodnight|
| Zohh chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
My only suggestion to you is that you get a beta-reader. You obviously are in dire need of one.
| Ardala91 chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
That was good. Nice to hear from Mai's side for once.
| DangerousDiamondDarling chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
Aww! Nice fic :D
| Sokkas Instincts 2 chapter 1 . 6/9/2008
I haven't seen this idea before and I got a kick out of reading it. The only thing you might want to tweak is taking out a few words in Mai's dialogue. She only talks when she needs to and even then gets right to the point. Very good though, think I'll check out the other one to.